12/20 c22 3Rafsolo
Good job! The principal is more annoying in your story than in canon. In my book, that's good writing
Good job! The principal is more annoying in your story than in canon. In my book, that's good writing
12/19 c22 3Tenzalucard123
So finally the Kaneshiro Group is starting to move and Ann was captured on her 1st. Spy Mission ... And what's up with Yusuke ?! Trying to imitate Makoto's stealthy little patty ?!
So finally the Kaneshiro Group is starting to move and Ann was captured on her 1st. Spy Mission ... And what's up with Yusuke ?! Trying to imitate Makoto's stealthy little patty ?!
12/12 c21 1Gordita2020
Nani!? Who's the target before Kaneshiro!? Is it the Principle? Eiko's Brother? Ah! So many theories
Nani!? Who's the target before Kaneshiro!? Is it the Principle? Eiko's Brother? Ah! So many theories
12/12 c21 1TheGrizz1982
Hmm? Is it time for the new palace? Is it Eiko's family? I bet it's Eiko's family.
Hmm? Is it time for the new palace? Is it Eiko's family? I bet it's Eiko's family.
12/12 c21 3Tenzalucard123
Finally Madarame has fallen ... I wonder, who was the case before Kaneshiro ... And when will Panther make her appearance?
Finally Madarame has fallen ... I wonder, who was the case before Kaneshiro ... And when will Panther make her appearance?
12/6 c20 3Rafsolo
Poor Yusuke. You make it seem like he got it worse here than in the game and anime. I'm glad you gave him a moment with his mother.
Poor Yusuke. You make it seem like he got it worse here than in the game and anime. I'm glad you gave him a moment with his mother.
12/5 c20 3Tenzalucard123
The Battle against Madarame finally ended ... And now follows the encounter against a certain Gloton and Money Lover.
The Battle against Madarame finally ended ... And now follows the encounter against a certain Gloton and Money Lover.
11/28 c19 Tenzalucard123
Well, Yusuke if they were Black before the truth but it did hurt that they used Ren and attacked Makoto ... I hope he compensates it ...
Well, Yusuke if they were Black before the truth but it did hurt that they used Ren and attacked Makoto ... I hope he compensates it ...
11/21 c18 Tenzalucard123
I'm glad that Yusuke freed Goemon and joined the group ... But ... Something tells me that Crow finally made his move and to top it off in Kaneshiro's service ... Ann / Panther will soon do yes appearance.
I'm glad that Yusuke freed Goemon and joined the group ... But ... Something tells me that Crow finally made his move and to top it off in Kaneshiro's service ... Ann / Panther will soon do yes appearance.