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12/20/2020 c17 Guest
your story is amazing you should continue it
11/23/2020 c17 PresidentTaffyta
I like how you included the one sweet race book in this chapter it developes his character more.
11/22/2020 c17 136Agent BM
Good chapter
11/10/2020 c15 Guest
Your version is MUCH better than the original. I was so let down when we only had like 20 seconds of the sugar rush racers on screen and nothing more. Did Disney not see all the attention and artwork the little brats get or what?!
10/14/2020 c11 PresidentTaffyta
I've been enjoying this fic :)
And i agree they deleted the BEST scene in the movie and replaced it with the princesses i hated that :(
10/5/2020 c10 Guest
I’m one of those weirdos that didn’t really dislike RBtI too much. I still don’t despise it, per se, but reading this story now makes me realize how much better it could have been. I like where you’re going with it; you’ve got some good ideas.
9/22/2020 c9 NickyCorewale
Shang: What kind of prince are you?
?: What kind...?
Eugene: Do you have a weapon of choice? *holds frying pan*
?: No.
Eric: Were you hypnotized?
?: No.
Kristoff: Do you have a steed? *pets Sven*
?: No.
John Smith: Were you shot?
?: No!
Naveen & Adam: Enchanted?
?: No!
Eugene & Philip: Kidnapped or enslaved?
?: No! Are you guys okay? Should I call the police?
Prince Charming: I know! You met a girl at the ball but she had to leave, and the only thing she has left was a glass slipper so you ordered every woman in your kingdom to try it on and that's how you'd find her!
?: No! That's crazy! Did you not even bother to ask of her name before she left?
The Prince (from Snow White): Have you ever had a True Love's Kiss?
?: *blush* I-I don't think so...
Aladdin: Do you have criminal records?
?: I'm trying my best to stay out of trouble.
Everyone: Yet troubles keep coming!
Eugene: And now for the million dollar question - have you ever sacrificed your well-being for the sake of others?
?: ...Yeah.
Everyone: HE IS A PRINCE!
The Prince (from Snow White): *high opera note*
9/14/2020 c7 91KagamiPINKAgreste
Oh yes the evil writer's block is the worst. Fourth wall jokes and true breaks are ALWAYS fun. Right pace you're writing is supposed to be fun NOT ever a chore. Well good luck when college starts especially in these times. Oh NICE stutter, so Vanellope may actually NOT go Turbo.

ON TO MY REVIEW: Damn Taffyta not even in Spamley's car for 5 minutes. Yet you already have a nasty adittude at Rancis. KnowsMore getting annoyed with Spamley understandable. Right Rancis yelling at KnowsMore, for fhe facts NOT His Vanellope's actual location is more than understandable.

The candy heart clip, Rancis is going to hold tight to that. As for that hyperlink holding hands chain, yes Rancis said crystal clear. I get the feeling someone would be left behind. Off to BuzzzTube everyone!
8/23/2020 c6 KagamiPINKAgreste
- spaceships, cars, babies, and lamps, that try to kill you, talking trees that you can't understand, and the fact that princesses are the last thing that I need to see right now. I think I should get out of this place. - Well Vanellope Disney is. . . MOVIES, MAGIC & MORE! Yeah I missed the candy jokes myself. Buzz Lightyear she met I'm so jealous.

HER ACTUALLY MEETING THE DISNEY PRINCESSES WAS MY FAVORITE OF THIS WHOLE STUPID MOVIE! Belle is favorite. Whom is yours? Plus the little bit of the SRRs with Felix/Calhoun.
8/20/2020 c5 KagamiPINKAgreste
'Main mean girls' Yeah that joke obvious. Tho Rancis' personality was explored more in One Sweet Race. I'm excited to see how you incorporate that here. RIGHT, the Virus, they never truly stopped it. It's like how in WIR Calhoun said to Felix before entering Sugar Rush. "Viruses do NOT stop." A family vacation, well hey things like that come first. You're updating now and quickly too so it's NOT too crazy.

ON TO MY REVIEW: Q*bert and his pals the GRAFFITI well stranger things have happened. Plus I love the reference to Surge Protector. End credits of WIR he does GRAFFITI. Candlehead loving the "ride" while Rancis and the others just scream saw that coming.

Rancis and them meet Spamley it's a start. That's what they get for NOT listening to Rancis. They wasted time asking avatars that couldn't even SEE them. Damn getting into the Internet, accidental Sugar Rush dog pile. Sorry about your spine Rancis.

OH MY DAMN CHERRY BLOSSOMS! Rancis "blacking out" in his beautiful detailed description of Vanellope SO LOVED THAT! 'She wears two Reese's Cup wrappers for a skirt, and Swizzle and Gloyd say that the wrappers come from my hat which is really embarrassing, and I wish they would stop.' Oh The Swizz and Annoying Hoodlum know in their codes you two are MADE for one another. I mean many don't comment of Vanellope's skirt IT'S RANCIS CANDY THEME! The biggest adorble shipping hint!

Not so laffy Taffy chill, about the damn. You don't use them much anymore and more importantly as Rancis said "We got to do whatever we can to find Vanellope." So take out a lollipop and suck on that instead. Right Match-head the Internet is as amazing as it is horrible. OFF TO SEE KNOWS MORE SWEET!
7/26/2020 c4 KagamiPINKAgreste
Read all 3 characters, definitely it's already much better than the actual sequel. So beyond LOVE the mini VanillaButter moments, Rancis of course is going with Ralph to get his Vanellope back.

Swizzle teasing Snowanna? Huh interesting possibility if puppy love but seriously he and Gloyd are pushing theur luck messing with ANY of the girls. Mr. Litwak hopes things are back to "normal" soon. The man has to know the truth.
7/25/2020 c4 5jbwarner86
First of all, I'm flattered to hear that I was an inspiration to you! It's always nice to see other artists get inspired to make their own stuff.

That said, I do have some suggestions. So far, the dialogue and the interplay between characters feels a little off. Wreck-It Ralph has a really distinct and offbeat writing style, very quick and witty and observational, and each character has a unique voice, even in text. Some of the dialogue here feels rather clunky and expository. There should be a natural flow to dialogue, so it feels like people actually having a conversation. Studying the movie's script might help, as well as other things that the people behind the scenes worked on in the past, like The Simpsons or Futurama.

And while I do understand your disdain for Ralph Breaks the Internet (lord knows I've been there too), some of the potshots at it feel rather forced and contrived. Like where you have Vanellope say out of the blue that she'd never want to jump into a violent open-world racing MMO. We the readers know what that's referencing, but in the context of that scene, that line has nothing to do with anything. I had a similar line in my own Wreck-It Ralph 2 story, but there, it was Vanellope's reaction to the suggestion that she strike out for home after her game had been moved to a new place. It made sense for her to bring up her reluctance to leave her game because that's what the scene was about, and the reference was played with more subtlety. It still reads as appropriate situational dialogue even for a reader who hadn't seen Ralph Breaks the Internet. A good alternate continuity fic should stand on its own without needing to wink at the audience too much.

I think you've got an interesting premise here, because surely there must've been at least a little awkwardness between Vanellope and the other racers when she first got everything set back to normal, and that's a great fertile springboard for a story. You just don't want to let your frustration with the sequel overwhelm it - it's better to channel that into a positive outlet, like "What would I have wanted to see from a sequel instead?" Go from there, and have fun :)
7/24/2020 c1 26TheBlueJetpack
I see effort, but I would slow down a degree or two. Posting 4 chapters within the first hour of publishing is rather excessive, not to mention the story rush.

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