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1/8 c9 Guest
PLEASE KEEP DUCK ALIVE!
12/16/2020 c9 16Deadly Ice 88
You can never save everyone.
That is a hard lesson that is well spent in an apocalyptic world like this. Very good chapter and the story is still just as interesting.
I look forward to the new chapter.
12/14/2020 c9 3Duncan.TDI
As the editor, I frankly enjoyed this chapter and Mark's death. Writing Mark is HARD, especially because there are usually other characters who do his job better (Take BYCAM for example, I gave the best friend role to Chuck, then moved it to Carley being both Lee's best friend and lover.) So I don't blame 404 for the killing off of the character.

Secondly, this one was fun to read as I edited it, probably because the stakes were a lot more dramatic, plus Daryl's inclusion spices things up. I do have a question though, did this war also happen in the other loops or just this one? Was Clem just left out of it or has it never happened until now?
12/14/2020 c9 Guest
Dont kill christa and omid that quick until a their baby is born
12/13/2020 c9 Guest
This is a amazing story but I feel sad that mark died early.
12/11/2020 c8 1Welcome-to-the-404
I'm not sure how many will see this, but I thought I would give a mini-update for those who checks reviews. Firstly, the first draft of the next chapter is finished and sent to my beta reader, so it may or may not be out sometime relatively soon.

More importantly, I just want to remind everyone the contest is still ongoing. The sooner you submit your character the better. I'm even willing to except double submissions (as long as you don't submit two students), but shake up the variety.

Hope things are going well for anyone who reads this and thank you.
11/15/2020 c8 16Deadly Ice 88
Glad to know you're back. As you continue to make the story more interesting with the inclusion of new characters.
I look forward to the next chapter.

P.S. I am interested in the idea of the Oc, when I have the opportunity I will send you mine by private message.
11/12/2020 c8 3Duncan.TDI
Before you added Darryl and Merle I thought the last seen was simply good. Now I think it's great! Great bits of foreshadowing and extra information.
11/12/2020 c8 1Worker72
Interesting the Dixon brothers from the TV series. Well Merle always stole the show when he was onscreen before his death and Daryl is still the most popular character in the TV series and the game really didn't show us much of the bandits before the group fled.
11/11/2020 c8 1Raion Shinz
Ooooh interesting twist as well as the whole challenge thing. Hm...

Well how about:

Kiana Wolf, 16, Student, Jock and Band Geek (soccer player, clarinet, guitar) who is a crack shot and isn't afraid to get her hands dirty because she'd gone hunting with her dad, Fred, since she was 9 which is when he first taught her how to use a gun. She doesn't know much about survival (like plants safe to eat) and is awkward around kids but tries anyway.

She has a dry sense of humor, sassy and sarcastic, sucks at math, and is a very logical and practical thinker even when it conflicts with her kind hearted and caring nature. She is kind and non-judgemental to everyone she meets but has some trust issues thanks to trauma she'd rather forget. But once you gain her trust she's fiercely protective of her friends even if she doesn't agree with them.

Her biggest weaknesses are she has a temper but is usually able to control it unless you try her patience, and her logical reasoning isn't always the moral high ground. She's not afraid to be the bad guy, even if being the bad guy hurts a friend, but it also hurts her too.

Hm hopefully I didn't make her too flawless. It's hard to describe a characters personality when you just know how you want to write them y'know?
11/11/2020 c8 Guest
Glad to see your back
11/11/2020 c7 FanfictionReader10000
My Character submission for the series

Name: Coen Rover
Age:17
Gender:Male
Occupation:None
Personality: A guy who jokes around a lot, a generally funny guy but gets serious when he has to.
Miscellaneous info: doesn't like telling people his last name, Brown hair and has a mullet, blue eyes and pretty tall
Role: Student

(If my character is included feel free to change him however you want)
10/27/2020 c8 Guest
I am fine with this Take as Much time as you need
10/26/2020 c8 FanfictionReader10000
I and many other people are fine waiting for you to finish. Sort out everything going on before continuing and as I said we'll be fine waiting.

Love the story btw
10/26/2020 c8 1LRef298
It's fine bro take as long as you need.
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