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5/25 c6 bogey174
Nice recap and excellent followup to how things turned out for Michael, Fiona & Charlie.
Give us a new chapter as soon as possible and thank you!
5/25 c5 bogey174
Michael & Fiona, the team that was always meant to be. Love how you are filling in the blanks and sorry I missed this when you updated.
Thank you,
5/9 c6 Guesttt
Ch. 6 - very interesting- hope you have more coming soon.
1/2 c4 PNPobsesses
What a great story. I hope you choose to finish it. Thank you for Sharing your talents.
8/25/2020 c4 bogey174
OMG, what a jam packed chapter with so many old friends and enemies. And Charlie, how old is he now? It appears he is following in his Uncle Mike's footsteps. Great work and thank you for the update!
8/24/2020 c4 Guesttt
Interesting detail about the "Masking". I wonder that Fiona's terms will be.
Yes I agree with other writer- do not read "The Dark" your story is good right now.
Cannot wait for more this week of August 24, 2020.
Thanks so much for a new story too.
8/3/2020 c3 110Dixie Dewdrop
I loved Fiona's method of fixing Charlie's dune buggy-
Dixie
7/27/2020 c3 4HannonsPen
Well done...I'm hooked! See you next chapter!
7/26/2020 c3 bogey174
Oh my, it seems two writers are concurrently writing a similar plot. I urge you not to read "Going Dark" so that your story can remain authentic and fresh. It will be exciting for Michael & Fiona fans to see where the stories take us.
Thank you for the update.
7/23/2020 c2 bogey174
Oh, my bad; they're not in Canada. Way down under in the South Pacific and yet not far enough to be found by Raines. It appears their wedding celebration and honeymoon will be short-lived with the arrival of some unexpected guests.
Good chapter, thank you
7/18/2020 c2 12Jedi Skysinger
i wonder what Raines has that has them risking revealing that Michael and family are not in fact dead.
7/16/2020 c2 7822
Exciting new story. Thanks for writing about what happens after they get way. I can’t wait to see what Raines wants.
7/15/2020 c1 4HannonsPen
((waving. THERE YOU ARE! I was going to inbox u last week...but I'm sick as a dog. I never watched Burn Notice but I'm sure your writing style will give me grace. Glad to see your creative flow is still bubblin!
7/12/2020 c1 bogey174
Great start! Love that they're in Canada and not Europe. I hope you write long chapters and frequently.
Bravo you and thank you,
7/11/2020 c2 beejed
Great start! Looking forward to more
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