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8/2/2020 c1 53BatWingteenavenger
Speaking of AFiH, are you planning on continuing that fic? I just got done reading chapter 27 and am baited breathing for the other chapters!

I love this, by the way XD
7/31/2020 c1 108Aviantei
Hm, an interesting snippet from the Eevee-verse timeline in relation to canon events. I feel like I should do another read of AFiH and UF, because there’s just so much going on that I feel like some of the details have slipped through the cracks...

Anywho, I’m curious as to what exactly stops Ayumu from getting pulled into the Red Skull pins, but it’s an interesting approach for him to just pretend that he’s sucked into everything. Tho this setup has me curious for the ending of AFiH and what makes him get to this point...

Still! A fun idea to poke around at and interesting to read. Here’s to me reviewing your other pieces soon!
-Avi
7/21/2020 c1 64Chronic Guardian
Hmm... yes, well framed. You set up the conclusion right from the start and lead up to it with a nice, strong, logical thread. Megumi isn't as controlled as he seems to be in original, but his well intentioned ego-centrism shines through.

I like your creative interpretation of [Wading Through Garbage] and am so proud of you for trimming this down. It's interesting to see Ayumu's take on Neku at this point, but I'm honestly forgetting where he falls in the whole UG hierarchy. He doesn't seem like a Reaper at this point, so does that make him an illegal resident? Or does that only apply to people who try to tamper with the Game? In that sense, Ayumu is being even more lawful than Megumi, eh? Wouldn't want to upend that perfect paradise ;P

Excellent to see you getting back to writing narrative! Keep up the good work~
-CG

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