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9/15/2020 c19 MadisonAva1
I loved the epilogue! It really brought everything together and showed the bond between all four of them. And Kit came so far. My favorite sentence started with "As the days and the weeks and the years went by" I had tears.

So many possible story lines as the 3 years went by in the epilogue! From Kit telling them about his past, to Molly's crush on him, to straight daily adventures that Baloo and Kit have delivering cargo. I think it'd make for a great story to check back in with Kit when he was an adult. Did he become the ace pilot that he dreamed of? Did he eventually fall in love with Molly? Does his past still haunt him all those years later? So many possibilities!
7/31/2020 c10 MadisonAva1
Another good chapter. I'm interested to see where Kit went!
7/25/2020 c4 Dino girl 16
Could you please make Kit believe in God in this fanfic? Thanks!:) God bless you!
7/26/2020 c7 MadisonAva1
Interested to see what happens next. Update soon!

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