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4/22 c15 1Elnarya
I really love this story! Wonderful writing and storyline. Hope you can update soon, I can’t wait to see what happens!
3/8 c15 grace
This is great! please update soon
1/23 c14 1wisdomwashere
AHHHHH THIS WAS SO GOOD PLEASE WRITE MORE
9/20/2020 c14 Aelin
love this story! update please!
8/29/2020 c14 Audrey H
U-P-D-A-T-E!

please?
8/24/2020 c13 Audrey H
I have returned! ...but you still haven't updated :( UPDATE PLEASE!
8/22/2020 c13 Audrey H
Right so yesterday I was like 'oh, she probably didn't update' then I get on this morning and you DID, and I could have had it YESTERDAY!
Side note (well not really side) tho glad they're not dead! But now they're slaves so maybe not that much better. (I sound like Spot don't I lol)
Please update soon!
8/20/2020 c12 Audrey H
Don't mind me, I'm just over here, rereading Chapters 6 and 7, waiting FOR AN UPDATE? BECAUSE YOU HAVE LITERALLY LEFT SPOT ON THE BRINK OF DEATH?
8/19/2020 c12 Audrey H
RIGHT so this is incredible, I just read the ENTIRE thing in one sitting. I'm putting all my reviews (for each chap) here so I don't spam you (you're welcome).
Chap 1:
Good introduction to the characters. I love Soft!Spot so much
Chap 2:
Whaaat? She? has? a? twin? and Blink's eye? Was in? the fire? Makes sense though, like burning wood or something stabbed him
Chap 3:
Gosh I love Em, she's hilarious "thought about it a few times myself"
Chap 4:
Right so Mush is mINE, (Spot's #2, which is why I'm reading this) but I can totally see him being like a serial flirt. Leading me too...
Chap 5:
"Enjoyin' da view toots?"
"Not particularly"
This LEGIT made me crack up, like hardcore! You go Eva, don't fall for any of that [crap].
And stealing Conlon's cane: i can totally see the hatten newsies talking like this! It's kinda a way for them to poke a little fun at brooklyn but you still show how theyre still kinda scared of it
Chap 5.5:
This is so cute honestly. Again I love Em. And let me guess Spot sent them? To get a dress for Eva? He was that boy, right? And that's why Em paid for part of it, Spot probably gave her money so that he could (indirectly) buy Eva a dress!
Chap 6:
W.O.W. L.O.V.E. T.H.I.S. S.O. M.U.C.H. Like, how did you get Spot so perfect? he's like sweet and tough at the same time!
Chap 7:
Pretty much the same as the last chapter! Blink's so protective of his sis it's so sweet 3 but Spot's right tho don't think she needs much protecting!
Chap 8:
NOOOOOOOOOO! YOU HURT EVA but Spot is still so cute asldkfj you're making me fall in love with him too
Chap 9:
Lollllllll Snipeshooter ,Les ,& Boots are like the Golden trio of Newsies or something, sooo cute. Are you like, trying to make my heart melt?
Chap 10:
Same as the last! Em. You are now officially my favorite character in this book.
"Ems. We don't have any cousins."

Chap 11:
How. Dare. You. Leave. Me. On. A. CLIFFHANGER! Like, girl. What is wrong with you? I neeeeeedddd an update to get me through online school!
(totally lame btw)
But how dare you! Unless you update soon: 'dishonor on you, dishonor on your cow, dishonor on your WHOLE FAMILY'
you have been warned!
side note tho Spot's got some pretty good comebacks
~Audrey
(i will be checking EVERY DAY for a chapter update. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED)
8/13/2020 c11 I'm the queen of New York
Wow, I thought Houdini was in the 1900s... We haven't covered him in history or anything, so I can't say I'm suprised that I didn't know that. Yeah Emma! I just love pranks... I can't beleive he fell for it! I burst out laughing at that and I'm preety sure my family is downstairs looking at each other like here she goes again, what's she reading this time? Great chapter! Update soon! I really need ta check my email more often, I keep noticeing these chapters a day or two after they come...
8/10/2020 c10 I'm the queen of New York
HAHA Yeah Snipeshooter! If it's for candy, Red should get hurt more often! But not like...Ya know what I mean. Shout that whenever ya see somebody about ta kiss somebody, and you'll live a mighty fine life! Just kidding... Ya probably shouldn't do that...
8/10/2020 c8 I'm the queen of New York
Wait, was Houdini around back then?
8/5/2020 c1 I'm the queen of New York
Also, isn't Spot's cane tucked in to the thingy that attaches his suspenders ta his pants?I don't know that's what I thought but I could be wrong.
8/5/2020 c1 I'm the queen of New York
YAY! Absolutly wonderful story! Update soon!
7/30/2020 c7 5FelineIncognito
Love the obvious but not overwhelming chemistry. And the kiss description is fine, especially if you're not going off firsthand experience
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