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for Only You (Your Promises Made True)

10/13/2020 c3 11marvynthephoenix
Aww, Remus find out!
10/13/2020 c2 marvynthephoenix
Poor Remus, this scene was so..realisitic!
10/13/2020 c1 marvynthephoenix
THIS IS SOOOOSWEET! I love this, okay? It's heartrending and amazing and so beautifully written!
8/15/2020 c1 1JadeSlytherin394
This was so saaaad but also really good. I dont cry easily but some of the stuff you put in there really hit me in a sensitive area. I actually teared up so thank you for an emotional story. I hope it grows longer.
8/11/2020 c1 notyetok
I'm reading this slowly, because it is so much to take in. Heartbreakingly beautiful. You have a gift. I can't wait to finish, but I don't want it to end.
7/19/2020 c1 2nikuds
Hey D!
Was waiting for this fic. After all any song by Little Mix is my favourite.
BTW, you are capable of writing anything. I am sure that this angst fic is going to be one of the best I have ever read.
WORD COUNT - 16839? ARE YOU GOING TO TURN ALL YOUR ONE-SHOTS INTO FICS? I DON'T KNOW IF THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE GOOD OR BAD THOUGH!
Self-assured smirk! - (This makes me smirk, I don't know why, for no reason) I like the way this sounds. I am imagining this scene in front of me and wow. It looks epic!
Ooooo grey eyes! They are always so pretty, however liquid and bright makes it sound more perfect (more perfect because it is already perfect).
Remy's pet name of Sirius- Siri (Siri play Night falls! here you may say Siri dance to Night falls)
"The Marauders have left their final legacy upon this fine institution." Okay! I am curious to know if they did play some prank on someone before leaving.
"You were getting good at leaving the Slytherins alone. Why did you break your record?" Lol That funny. But Remus as usual the on with a soft heart!
"We were honour-bound" Lol
Targeted Snape- That was bad!
Slimy old Snivellous -
non-existent pride instead of their limbs! -
Lily has had better luck teaching James the joys of ethics - "JOYS OF ETHICS!"
"Black hair shifts again with a sigh" - Why is he named black hair?
"shagging in the dorms, like any other couple making their final memories together"
Peter is sneaking his last cakes -
"Yeah, Siri?"
Rm the overthinker!
Now it is become si . "si" means yes in French.
"Smooth, velvety teasing voice" - Oo love is in the air as usual.
"kings of this old castle" - Majestic

"little cub"
"he never gets peace when he wants some." - poor Rem!
"gain support of four runaway, now homeless were wolves in a back alley at eleven in the night."
"flashy scarf"
AH! Another cliche about France.
This is so emotional! I don't know why "speechless" (Naomi Scott) is playing now but it is making the atmosphere really emotional.
"Non-existent tails back to Scotland and shove them at Dumbledore" -
"Right, right, left, straight." It should have been left, left, left, right another left and then maybe straight!
"Stargaze from the Eiffel" - I too want to stargaze. I wish they could adopt me!

This is such a heart-breaking scene. I can't imagine the trauma.
Now here comes Azkaban.
No, words. This is going to make me cry DDDDDD!

At last some happiness for poor Remy.
Wait! Where is the introduction between Harry and Remy. I am waiting for that.
I understand Siri escaped but where is the INTRODUCTION?
"Skeeter woman" - reporter of daily prophet
"crisp tan leather case!" Moooooony
Memories, DDD you are going to make me cry over this. I don't know why I am so emotional today.
Behind the prefect's carriage, some certain privilege?
Finally! Now please please please don't put Remy to sleep.
At least pretense! That's good.
Such a James move! Ah ha!
Another memory. It is such a sweet and pleasant one!

Supposedly dead man!
Exact same position for the past six minutes. !
Babysitter for James and Sirius' wild prank experiments! - When I seen the word Babysitter I thought it was for Harry. But I was mistaken!
Product of the boy's insomnia?
Poor map, it has been such an important part of the story.
Also, why is it SiriusSiriusPeterSirius? And not only SiriusSiriusSiruisPeter?
Now the willow is become an alcoholic! Wa! Wah!
Okay, they are having their reunion finally. What happens to the rest of the people. Are they still staring at them?
Snap Snap Snape has finally made an entrance!
Peter has changed. I thought he must have put on weight but here he has lost some.
Sirius listens. Seems like a big thing.
Siri, is never serious.
I like this part "And the brave, might, dashing lion Padfoot carries the young prince Harry back to safety! Look, Harry, there's the castle! We're gonna make it!"
OMG The ending! It seems like a cliffhanger. NOT FAIR DDDD!
But overall, this moved me a lot. I was on the verge of tears so many times. Quite emotional.
I don't know if you meant to make it an emotional story but it is emotional to me anyways. Good Job! Loved it!

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