8/21/2020 c9 4uflesh940
Wow, what an awesome story! The characters are well developed, Louise particularly, and the plotline is pretty good in general! Keep up the good work!
Wow, what an awesome story! The characters are well developed, Louise particularly, and the plotline is pretty good in general! Keep up the good work!
7/24/2020 c5 McPoopin
You can leave out the "Reality Mode" "Diary Mode" qualifiers. We're big, smart readers, and we can recognise the change in narration style without the constant giant flashing neon sign telling us about it.
You can leave out the "Reality Mode" "Diary Mode" qualifiers. We're big, smart readers, and we can recognise the change in narration style without the constant giant flashing neon sign telling us about it.