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for Scarlet Handed One: The Vanishing Grandmother

4/2 c9 2pucksgirlfriend14
Ahhhhh puckabrina and this is sweet
4/2 c6 pucksgirlfriend14
so interested in here this going omg
4/2 c5 pucksgirlfriend14
I LOVE THAT ITS NOT JUST IN FERRYPORT
4/2 c4 pucksgirlfriend14
AW CUTE
4/2 c3 pucksgirlfriend14
love where this is going but the anger that fills me when puck and Sabrina arent together is not ok
4/2 c2 pucksgirlfriend14
STOP THIS IS SO PRETTY
2/5 c9 52Curlscat
yooo this is getting good! is that a shade of red/daphne I see? I'm partial to that ship ngl. (also I appreciated the puck/peter pan you alluded to earlier bi puck is my jam)
2/5 c8 Curlscat
again i think this fic deserves more attention and numbers can make things look more popular

but like. take your time on the updates.
2/5 c7 Curlscat
i'm just responding to you a/n because i think this fic deserves more reviews
2/5 c6 Curlscat
ok so whether moth de-aged to be puck's age somehow or faked her way to aging up to have some kids, it's creepy either way. And something I've never seen done with Moth before, so I'm interested! Usually people just kind of have her show up in school with Puck and Sabrina and like. use a love potion or kidnap Sabrina or something
2/5 c5 Curlscat
wait, so does Sabrina still have amnesia? was that temporary? It seems like it's getting a little glossed over emotionally. idk maybe i'm just reading too fast and missing things.
2/5 c4 Curlscat
so the constructive criticism I was thinking of last chapter was mostly a stylistic thing. You use "mother" and "father" for the girls when they're talking to their parents, and it just reads odd. Not saying that kids CAN'T call their parents something other than "mom" and "dad," but it runs really formal, if that makes sense?

I'm sort of wondering if you're doing that on purpose, though, because a lot of this story seems like it's aiming to keep the reader kind of off-kilter, what with the time skips and the throwing Sabrina into these scenes of an alternate reality/future/something.
2/5 c3 Curlscat
so question. how interested are you in constructive criticism? if you don't want it i'll keep my mouth shut on that front. if you don't mind, I do have some Thoughts (nothing bad! but i know some people just want to write and be left alone)
2/5 c2 Curlscat
oooh, intriguing!
2/5 c1 Curlscat
oooh, an in-progress fic that's got a draft done! that's exciting!
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