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8/24 c7 1Miraak Darklight
Heya.

This is a nice story. I tried to fav and follow, but apparently, there is a "network problem" stopping me T.T

Still, I hope you'll continue this someday, this is very good. Especially seeing the mess some words by a simple boy lashing out and a bitterly stupid "adult" (if we can call Snape an adult with how he's acting) can bring.
8/9 c7 10Frog1
More please! :)
7/15 c7 38Kourtney Uzu Yato
Ah, Severus, you and that black tongue of yours, always in need to spit venom like that of a sex and drug addict in heavy withdrawal, but his vices will always bite him, that's the wonderful thing. Dear Minnie is no different and the two Hufflepuffs found themselves in shock, huh? How wonderful.
I love Cedric's relationship with our dear Lady Potter and Lady Longbottom. I can't wait to see more of this, take care.
7/12 c7 Archean
This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read here on this site. I love the way you are cutting down the abusers to bite sized pieces.

Congrats on penning down what is one of the best WIP's on the site and looking forward to more.
6/30 c7 Fallow57
xXxx Kudos xxXx : )
6/24 c7 EP
EXCELLENT
MERCI POUR LA LECTURE
6/24 c3 Blitzstrahl
6 months detention for walking towards someone in a angry manner? Is there even 6 months left in the school year by this time in the story?
6/24 c1 Blitzstrahl
It's a whole lot of extra words being used. Where Heir Apperent, and Heir Presumptive would suffice.
6/23 c7 magitech
About time Minerva told off Snivellus for his horrid attitude, bullying and the outright assaults he committed as a student, JK tried to make it look like it was all the marauders fault but when she pointed out Snape and his buds used dark magic on a lone girl, what did she think would go through people's minds?
6/23 c7 26917brat
This is just amazing and I would really love to read more of this so I seriously hope that you decide to update this again soon, as I am eagerly waiting to see just what you are going to have happen next.
6/23 c7 668the stargate time traveller
Welcome back.
What happened with the Nimbus 2000, and what was the reaction? I can't imagine it being spectacular, given how obsessed many Gryffindors are with Quidditch. What had McGonagall done by that point to make Holle just hand it back like that? What about Colin Creevey?
6/23 c7 1FailedKeikaku
The progress of the story will depend on the reviews?... That sounds like blackmail! Well i for one will not st-... i see, well then Keep up the good work! Fantastic chapter! Looking foreward to more, *wink wink*
6/23 c7 JohnMonty
Great chapter! So McGonagall thinks she is 1st on Potters shit-list. I always thought it would be Dumbledore for dumping her with her magic-hating, abusive relatives to rot and then putting her in danger during her Hogwarts years, shaping her to be A sacrificial lamb for Britain. If note him then Snape for all the abuse and when she eventually finds out that it was him who overheard that fraud Trelawney's prophecy and delivered it to Voldemort which lead to her parents murders. It isn't going to be pleseant for Snape and Dumbles when she finds out that. Hope they all get there heads on A pike and there reputations end up in tatters and go down in the history books as vile child-abuse condoning scumbags. No excuses for all the crap they put Holly through and no doubt other students throughout the years. Great fanfic, I'm glad it has finally been updated after so long. Looking forward to reading more and hope the next update will be much sooner! Update soon!
5/1 c6 Claddagh
I just found this story...and I love it. Thank you for sharing.
3/19 c6 guest
yanno, this shoulda happened in canon yah? i wonder how far you'll take this fic, its totes good and hits where it hurts most. i hope to see a future in this as you're good at reality ensuing.
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