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7/22 c1 ohhcarol13
Finally, Emily got there. It’s so good to see them finally have time together for themselves. Kinda miss Jacob though. Lol. Can we have the conversation about kids too? Thanks for this update. Can’t wait to read Jacob finally gets better.
7/21 c23 emison-hope
i loved this chapter so much, the conversations between Ali and Em are one of my favorite things in this story and i can't wait for the next Update.
thank you for your amazing work!
7/20 c23 12Packersgirl492
Wow, this chapter was amazing! Thank you for the work you put into it! The conversations Emily and Alison have in this story and the progress they've made in their relationship just melts my heart. I'm glad Emily's processing her past with Ashton because honestly how can she truly move forward with Ali without doing so? I also love that she realizes Ali is the key here for marriage-like if it was anyone else, marriage would probably never be on the table, but Ali's too remarkable (and selfless) a person not to want to spend forever with.
7/20 c23 3Leapyearbaby29
Emily came around! Yay! I love how they’re best friends. Your best friend will always be your significant other. I loved seeing Emily open up to Alison about Ashton. I’m so glad they went on this vacation. It was very much needed. Loved their teasing and banter about who’s the instigator for sexy times. I can see Alison being the one who does it more. Lol. This chapter was well worth the wait. Hope you’re doing well. Just curious, do you have any story planned after this one? If not, could I give you a few ideas? If you want. Anyways, great chapter. Can’t wait for the next one. :)
6/21 c22 12Packersgirl492
What an amazing chapter! Thank you for writing it! Seeing the development in Emily and Alison's relationship is so special to read-that switching of the shoes at the hospital was too darn cute and their venting/taking care of one another sessions are the best. I also love how Jacob is opening up to Emily more and more as the story goes on (and the fact that Alison refers to him as "our son" when talking to Emily is just great!). Ugh, Emison and Jacob melt my heart (and Carter's not too bad either lol). I can't wait to see what happens next in this story (fingers crossed Emily doesn't get in too much trouble for what she did at work).
6/17 c22 omgabcd
Oh my god! An update after the longest timeeeee. Finally! Def dint disappoint. Please update soon!
6/17 c22 3Leapyearbaby29
I loved this! I really hope Jacob’s cancer goes away and he beats cancer’s ass. What exactly did Emily mean by her taking a sample of Jacob’s cancer cost her her job? She wasn’t fired and Claire is helping her. I can’t believe Jacob is eight! Wow! I loved this chapter! Can’t wait for the next one. I hope you’re doing well. :)
6/17 c1 2justanemisonfan
This story is sooo good, it's one of my favourite. I can't wait for the next chapter<3
6/17 c22 justanemisonfan
I loved this chapter so much! You are an amazing writer, i can't wait for the next chapter<3
6/13 c21 Guest
Hope you update soon. Love this story.
6/7 c21 omgabcd
New

NEED an update ASAP
6/2 c1 Guest
At this point I check every day to see if this story has been updated ! Please haha
5/24 c21 Guest
Love it can’t wait for what to come
5/1 c21 3Leapyearbaby29
Did Emily steal a sample of Jake’s biopsy for her study? Is Jake patient 2AC9? And Claire helped her? Damn. So Emily is going to find a way to make sure Jake’s cancer never comes back. Wow. I’m glad Jake’s surgery went well. I really hope the tumor on his brain stem goes away with chemotherapy. I love that Jake felt Emily hold his hand during his surgery. That is so sweet. I loved Alison taking care of Emily and giving her a bath. It’s the little things. I still hope we meet Spencer. Lol. This was a great chapter! I can’t wait for the next one! :)
5/1 c20 Leapyearbaby29
I don’t think you can choose the embryo and what sex the baby will be. Science hasn’t really gotten to that point. Lol. I still hope they end up with twin girls. Or at least one girl. Please? :) I wonder what Emily’s suggestion was about the hair. Are they goin to get an under shave in the back of their heads that can be easily hidden? I love that Emily is telling Jake exactly what is going to happen. That’s important. God, she’s going to be such a great mom. I love that Alison and Emily continue to communicate to each other when something is wrong and stuff. That’s important in a healthy relationship. So, next is the surgery. Ooh boy. And the last chapter that I need to catch up on. Great chapter. :)
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