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8/22 c3 3xJustBelieve
Okay this kind of made me laugh up until the end. I mean seriously, Graves is honestly so daft not realizing the Obscurus was right in front of him the entire time haha. I love how he just kept talking about the weather regardless of how hard it tried to be noticed.

Then that last line reeled it all in and made me really sad. Given his home life I believe that to be very true. That last line packed quite the punch.

Loved this little drabble. I hope you write more of these soon!
8/22 c2 84TrueBeliever831
Oh my goodness. I can imagine that Tina was absolutely mortified... Not surprised she made him forget lol. That is not something she wants him knowing about. Not sure where you got this idea but, you managed to pull it off, so kudos to you for that. Sorry this review was a little bit on the shorter side.
8/20 c1 3xJustBelieve
Okay, I have to admit I was a little bit confused by this but, it didn't take away from your writing any. You write wonderfully. I can't believe Henry called poor Credence trash. :( He was incredibly rude.
I have to imagine it was quite the sight seeing her stuck with her hair in the leaflet machine. I am sure that caused them both quite a panic.
I look forward to reading more of these drabbles as well :)
8/19 c3 93queendementor
i have this feeling every time i watch the first movie. like, if grindelgraves knew to look for an obscurial in new york of all places, how does he not realize said obscurial is RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIS FACE?
that last part is so sad tho? i just want to reach in there and hug him...which i usually want to do anyway. i'm feeling all kinds of things here.
8/8 c1 44Maisie Malfoy
I don't really feel like a serious fic at the moment. And so I pick this piece of insanity.
Why are there so many instances of Mary Lou trying to take Ivan out in public? It never ends well, and it's not like she doesn't have a leaf hat to remind her of her beloved.
In my mind I see Langdon as an embodiment of the people who stumble upon our stories, not knowing what's going on or how to respond.
The part with the explosion of pea soup reminds of the inappropriate amounts of bread Ivan buried his wife in. Great leaf machines think alike. :)
8/2 c2 whencowsfly06
Oh... wow.

I didn't really get the first one, but it was something about the leaf machine named Ivan being Mary Lou's husband, right? I didn't really watch the Fantastic Beasts movies or read the Crimes of Grindelwald. Maybe I missed it in the first book?

The second one, though, is definitely from the first book. Also, it's hilarious. And the fact that Newt noticed that during a life-or-death situation is... absurd, yet cute. It's a very Newt thing to do. And Tina was so embarrassed that she had to Obliviate him!

Keep it up, and I enjoyed it even though I'm not very familiar with the Fantastic Beasts series.
8/1 c1 queendementor
omfg dragon you have outdone yourself. this is absolutely, positively quality entertainment right here.

i've never related to langdon shaw so hard in my life. who truly knows what's going on here?

OMFG HE ATE CHASTITY'S HAIR DEAD DEMENTOR IS DEAD. srsly tho. poor thing.

side note: henry shaw jr. absolutely deserves to be covered in pea soup. if this were a movie i'd rewind that scene over and over.

i love this so much, dragon. i've said this before but YOU ARE THE BEST AT FORUM FICS.

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