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12/6/2020 c1 aki-chou
Hey ! This is a nice beginning you wrote here, and actually it almost feels like Hiruma and Mamori's relationship would have started this way, had the authors written about it !
Besides I like your way of writing, so I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter ! I wanna know how you will introduce bribes about their relationship within the storyline of the manga. And of course, I will happily take any romantic moment you'll slide in !

Good luck for writing and everything that's happening these days !
(sorry if I made any mistakes, English is my second language)
10/25/2020 c1 13karliss
I need the next chapter!
8/17/2020 c1 dnka0225
Thank you for the story, it was such a breeze since there's not much left from eyeshield fandom. To you for mixing the fanfiction and canon must be quiet a hardwork. Please keep on writing, I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
8/8/2020 c1 11Amamimon
Awesome, most of them is in character. I'm kinda surprised how you made Mamori became quite emotional; as far as I understand, she only becomes all worrisome and stubborn when it comes to Sena. But it's not really breaking her characters.

And if you want too, maybe you can change the Japanese particles when each character calls each other. Kurita calls Hiruma with his name only without the -kun, like Musashi. But it's up to you.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
8/7/2020 c1 1sakurenjiDREamer
Agh! I'M SO GLAD THIS ISN'T A ONESHOT! Oh my! I have such a big smile in my face ATM! Glad you had peace already being able to get this out of your system. Hahaha! I hope I can do the same soon! XD
Oh, my! This is such a delight to read! It is so in character not just for Hiruma and Mamori but for the other characters as well! I really liked how divided these. The divisions didn't feel rushed nor dragged. Also, what you have written is also really insightful into the characters. Thank you for sharing this head canon of yours! I was quite surprised when I reachef the end. The 6000 words didn't feel so long. So I was really glad that there will be another chapter. I'm excited for this one! I agree that what's so delightful with Hirumamo is the development of their relationship.

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