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12/24 c30 2LewtonSpoons
Bruh I'm actually very sad right now why have you done this to me
12/23 c30 Guest
Have Leo STOP the republic from executing Barriss Offee by making a speech.
12/23 c30 22clank2662
you need to fix leos yelling at obi wan you put selene instead of satine
12/23 c30 SuperSaiyajin4Vegeta
Did Leo mean Satine at the end?
12/23 c30 Agent N
I admit it. This is far sadder than the original one. I have a feeling that Leo will began to distance from the Jedi Council and other Masters, except Anakin & Obi Wan after Ahsoka left the Order, similarly from a Grey Jedi. Another one of my ideas that Leo decide to EXILE himself from the Order & the Republic in search of the knowledge & meaning of the Force, like from KOTOR II(Knights of the Old Republic 2 game) character, Meetra Surik aka Exile. Maybe he will go to Dagobah, Lothal or Tython.

I leave this Review if you appreciate my idea. Thank you, Merry Christmas and may the Force be with you always.
12/23 c30 DuckBoi
I did say what would happen next would only hurt more. I don’t even know what will happen now.
12/21 c29 SuperSaiyajin4Vegeta
Who is Zack?
12/21 c28 2PJShiper
love it please continue
12/20 c28 chiripa012
Hey can you update spider boy chapter. Please we been waiting for it. We want find out who Adrian mother. Please.
12/20 c28 Hghg
Ich denke beide sollten geramt werden und es sollte im Gericht mit angesprochen werden oder im Rat das leo die Opfer nach Hause gebracht haben und wenn beide die jedie verlassen das sie zu Leos Eltern gehen weil so kannst du die probleme die Leos bruder gegen ihn hat verwenden
12/20 c28 1RiviiWraith
That's actually genius though. With Leo and Ashoka havibg just... you know, having her faith questioned and her friends betray her and the person she cares about? If that don't push them together not much else will XD. Plus there's no doubt that the council will blame Leo for "corrupting" Ashoka, damaging or out right ruining Leo's Faith in the Jedi as well. At the same time tho, if Leo isn't accused of anything him still being in the order could be a strong drive for Ashoka to be willing to come back into the order instead of leaving. Lots to work here. Can't wait to see what you choose!
12/20 c28 CommanderATE
So I believe your judgement is best because you've written a killer story so far. But you could have Leo framed since Barriss didn't like him so she could purposefully frame him because of that. Then you could have Obi Wan mention something about how he doesn't think so because Leo has been getting along with Anakin and Ahsoka, which would prompt Mace or another Master to say perhaps Ahsoka was involved too? Like have Leo get framed but have the council be idiots and frame them both perhaps? I think having Leo with Ahsoka through season 7 would he really interesting myself. As I said though, you've done an amazing story so it's whatever you want, I hope you take as much time as you need to continue
12/20 c28 Guest
Have Leo framed.
12/19 c28 22clank2662
If you frame him then it conflicts with the order 66 unless you find another way for her to leave the order besides leaving cause she loves leo. If you frame them both then you loss the leo and anakin rage scene but if you frame just her than your not affecting the story but the overall story will be changed cause youll either have to make it so he stays or he leaves sith ahsoka
12/19 c28 Guest
Ahsoka
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