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1/7 c13 Guest
Kiki dont let negative people discourage you, we love this and all your other stories and your talent its incredibly good , I appreciate and I know a lot of your readers do too for your time writing these stories of yours , and specially for this chapter because we begged you for this chapter and you written it for us , thank you so much.
1/7 c13 Guest
To : hnyglzd.
So please read the story back and may sure you understand it, and NO , this is not a garbage , this is an amazing story and chapter 13 well done , and ending in a beautiful way , I am so glad Nita isn't have her way and screwed Tobias and Tris relationship, please read the story and then make a comment , and if you continue thinking this is not the right story for you ,just stop reading it but dont says its garbage because for me and a lot of us who are following this story we love it. So pleas KiKi dont let negative people discourage y
1/7 c13 Guest
To : hnyglzd , I would like to invite you to read chapter 13 because according to your comment about this chapter its obvious you didnt read it, because it's very clear Four never cheated on Tris , he was drunk and yes I agree with you , being drunk never justified a betrayal, but Tobias never did that , he was laying on his bed drunk, this girl come inside kissed him , it's normal he was in shock at first he did never kissed her back his first thought was about Tris then he pushed her away and kicked her out of his room and his life, and then he run to look for Tris , sono , absolutely NO, he didnt cheated on her , please read the story and you
1/7 c13 1GreekFangirl74
*sniff* so beautiful. Plz plz plz keep writing!
1/6 c13 goldensnitch1
Thank goodness he got rid of that trash! I can’t wait for Tris to let loose on her!
1/2 c13 hnyglzd
This is trash. The way Tobias got away easily from what he did on Tris is garbage. A total GARBAGE. He practicality cheated on her. BEING DRUNK IS "NOT" AN EXCUSE. The type men who are saying oh baby I was drunk last night so fucked her I'm sorry my bad oops I tend to kiss other women when I'm drunk so get to use to it dumb woman. Those type of men is GARBAGE. And the weak women who easily fall for LAME EXCUSE are equally GARBAGE. I really can't believe this. This is the most UNREALISTIC SHIT I'VE EVER SEEN. Really? She accepted him and forgave him the same night? IS THERE ANYTHING MORE DISGUSTING THAN THAT?

Dude, you've just introduced Tris as an easy to be manipulated type of weak dumbass woman. This is so unrealistic. No one could ever relate to that. If Tris is a real woman, she shouldn't talk to him for a week, heck even for a month. At that moment she should at least can't stomach yet to kiss him because it's disgusting what he had done. That's what a real woman would feel and do. If a woman witnesses that kind of shit, she would need time to think, a lot of time and space to think and cry and release her anger and feelings. Not like this.
NOT THIS CRAP. Forgave him after 30 minutes. Tobias should've fucked Nita, he'll be forgiven anyway. So next time fuckboy Tobias, fuck Nita okay? You can always say an excuse that you're drunk. You've got a PUSHOVER and dumb woman so that's not a problem.

Tobias cheated on Tris...

...30 minutes later, he's forgiven.

Should I say Amazing? Or Disgusting.
Disgusting suits more, really.

Dude, if his precious Nita fucked him right there and there, removed her clothes and all, TOBIAS WOULD FUCK HER BACK, for sure. Bro, Nita could pull this off again, no problem, her sucess rate is 101 percent. We've already seen how easy to get is Tobias when it comes to Nita and how dumb and weak girl is Tris for accepting him RIGHT AWAY,
literally THE SAME NIGHT HE DID THE SIN.
Who does that? Realistically, women will need time to think and to stay away from horrible men if they witnessed something like that. That horrible scene will every woman's dream, it will be their nightmare. If you forgive a man that easily, it's like telling them that they can do it again. It's like giving them the privilege to do it again.
Once a cheater, always a cheater.

Tris is a pushover here. A strong woman would stand her ground and teach a garbage man like that a lesson. A strong woman knows how to teach their man a lesson that he'll never ever forget. Tris is weak. A pushover. She has no character development and this chapter showed that. You can just step on her, it's alright. Next time, Tobias can pull off the "I am drunk" excuse again. If you have a dumbass girl like that, you won't really have a hard time doing sin, even right in front of her face. She will forgive you after 20-30 minutes, max 45 minutes.

Tsk. Nita should've opened her pussy for Tobias there. Tobias will definitely going to eat her up happily cause he's drunk right. HE IS DRUNK.

This is really awful. The fact that both male and female lead are equally disgusting. A MANIPULATIVE MAN AND A PUSHOVER WOMAN. PERFECT COMBINATION FOR A TOXIC RELATIONSHIP.

The way you use the DRUNK CARD as an excuse was trash. Only trash men use that. The way Tris didn't even have a moment to express what she's feeling. You should have made her speak up. You should have at least made her cut off Tobias when he said he's drunk. And say something like,

oh so that is what you gonna do when you're drunk? What if you get drunk again next time and Nita appears right and front of you and throw herself at you? What you gonna do DRUNK MAN?! What you gonna do? What if next time you get drunk again, huh?!

Next time, Tobias will make Nita pregnant and he's going to say Tris he's drunk. And everything will be back to normal again, happily ever dumb after.

I swear if there will be no "TRUST ISSUE" after this, I don't know, man. This is really the most unrealistic shit I've ever seen. Women wouldn't just MAGICALLY feel okay after witnessing a horrible shit that their own man did. This is MAGIC not REALITY. Tris's portrayal is some kind of retard. She's worse than a mentally ill woman. A mentally ill woman could show and feel more emotions than this one. I'm really sure Tris won't even have trust issue after this. Wanna bet?
THERE WILL NO TRUST ISSUES in this unrealistic shit.

In reality, if you think that your woman is already okay, then think again. She will never be just MAGICALLY feel okay after you've done some shit. What is she? AN INSTANT NOODLES? Tris here looks more like my instant noodles than a human. My instant noodles can do better.

The man almost fuck another woman right in front of her face. YAY! 101 PERCENT OF HER TRUST FOR THE MAN IS BACK AFTER 1 MINUTE! WELCOME TO THE BEGINNING OF TOXIC RELATIONSHIP!

All it takes is saying I AM DRUNK to get her trust back. What a hard to get woman she is.

Next time Tobias, you better make Nita pregnant. Go all the way bro! It won't be a problem I swear. With the dumbass girlfriend you have. It won't be a problem. You can always say that you are DRUNK.
1/1 c13 Guest
AWWW
1/1 c13 expat24
Gosh Tobias got away with it lightly... Blasted Nita always looking for trouble and inviting herself in when actually she's not welcome ! Thank god for Zeke and Shauna to make up for the disastrous evening and saving the day. Well FourTris is now back on track for the midnight kiss... well done and great chapter.
1/1 c13 9AriIsDivergent
Oh my god yes they fixed it whew...great chapter! Happy New Year!
1/1 c13 Guest
Great chapter, thank you, thank you, thank you ,. Happy New Year!
1/1 c13 Guest
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Beautiful Kiki! ...you gave me the most amazing past to a new year by posting this chapter wish I love it the way Tobias and Tris made up things between both of them, it was super sweet , thank you. Happy New year , God bless you and your family for the rest of the year.
1/1 c13 4Elleseries46
I love this so much!
12/31/2020 c13 4Sensitivity8
I'm so glad that Zeke and Shauna stepped in to help Tobias, they truly are good friends. Now the question comes as to what Tris and Tobias are going to do about her when she has to choose a college. Are they going to try and make it work long distance?
12/31/2020 c13 dreamer2323
great chapter, so happy everything worked out in the end! and i just want to say I appreciate all the updates, its been so nice to keep up with all your amazing stories! hope you have a great new year!
12/31/2020 c12 Guest
I am so mad at Tobias and fucken Nita , all I hope Tris give Tobias a hard time and do not forgive him that easy, I want her to be stronge and make Tobias regret for what he had done to her. Amazing chapter ,and if you have any consideration and feel sorry for our ass , lol, please dont leave us in the limbo to long and update soon please. Happy New year, :( please update.
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