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12/26 c5 Margarite987re
Hi. I loved this chapter!Harley and Vinnie I like the interaction between them. And Charley and the others! I hope to the next one! : D
11/29 c5 Guest
I’m loving this! This is the kind of BMFM story that I have been looking for for years. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
11/29 c5 wolftattoo
Hey, Youkai55 you say Vinnie's attracted to Harley but what happens when Charley shows up what's Vinnie gonna do then?
11/29 c5 Styx
Oh Vinnie. Tssss
11/29 c5 12Youkai55
He’s definately attracted to Harley, and she feels something for him.
Have a feeling, things are going to get interesting around the base.
11/29 c5 13Vlaatjee
Yeaahhh, an update! Whoop whoop! Totally enjoyed reading this chapter, especially the part with Vinnie and Harley. It was simply perfect.
And why am I not surprised that Vinnie managed to get them into trouble, hehe. That boy is a piece of work alright. Loved it!

And please, don’t be so hard on yourself about the errors. Don’t get me wrong, I totally understand that you’re bummed about them, I would be too, but someone once told me that it’s normal that some of them slip through the grammar check. They didn’t bother me. Anyway, keep it up and ride free! :D
11/28 c5 10Flowangelic
I was so happy to see an update. I'm having such a crappy week...
I got tested positive for covid (my husband too) and it has not been easy.
Reading your update was a great distraction!
So Charley and Noah used to be a thing, huh?
I loved Harley and Vinnie together, inspecting the area the humans are, with Harley trying to stop Vinnie from doing anything stupid...
And then him holding her and getting hit by her scent, hehe. Careful, Vinnie!
It was great, can't wait for the next update.
11/2 c4 Margarite987re
Goodnight! Great chapter! I loved it!
Good research work! Vinnie is so rebellious, it amuses me.
Nice job.
10/31 c4 Flowangelic
They always make fun of the geologists, don't they?
Their banter was so much fun, poking and jabbing at each other, and then BOOTPRINTS!
I loved it! Again it is such a great idea this story! Thanks so much for the update, Spaceflora. Amazing!
10/30 c4 13Vlaatjee
Yeah, an update! Whoop whoop!
And, as usual, a good one too. It’s clear that you do, indeed, a lot of research while writing this story, which is quite the addition to the story, for the details make it even easier for the reader to picture it perfectly inside their heads. And, as always, I love Vinnie. Laughed out loud when I read the ‘sand-man’ part. It was just so easy to picture and oh my, it’s so Vinnie-like. Love it.
Thanks for this update and keep up the good work!
10/22 c2 Styx
Good job. Nice Story frame. And i really like the character of the three biker mice. It is exactly them - only an adult version
10/14 c3 Margarite987re
Good nigth.
From Chapter 2: I love the way Throttle describes Modo and Vinnie. Throttle is always a good storyteller.

Chaper 3: It's interesting how you describe the Monastery, that place has always caught my is very interesting how little by little you are introducing us to history. And it's interesting how you pose the role of the mouse woman.
Keep it up. Good job!
10/4 c3 12Youkai55
Flora,
Nice bit of history here.
How close to the series are you planning on keeping this?
10/3 c3 13Vlaatjee
Wow, you’re fast. I love it!
So, once again, very good job. It’s crazy how detailed your writing is, and I do mean crazy in a good way.
You’re truly gifted.
I absolutely love this story, and all I can say right now is to keep up the good work! And I hope you update soon, can’t wait to find out more about these humans.
10/3 c3 10Flowangelic
Obviously my heart jumped and I might have squealed when Stoker showed up (I mean who can blame me, right?)
I really enjoyed this chapter. Lots of different moments and interactions. As well as your take on the history of the Martian race, which is always interesting to read from another author. It was great!

Thank you so much for this rapid update, SpaceFlora. Eagerly awaiting the next one!
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