9/29/2003 c1 Lady Destro
Outstanding characterizations and well detailed writing. A pleasure to read...
Outstanding characterizations and well detailed writing. A pleasure to read...
7/21/2003 c2 23RougeBaron
Excellent story!
Very nicely written, and awesome character development. I like the relationship between Drake and Falcon, from frying each other's butt to saving each other's butt. And I love it when you put technical jargons. It shows that you do your homework well.
Just for your information, "Great White Shark" is an antisocial rogue. It's highly unlikely that we'll find a shark den full of GWS (remember Jaws? GWS hunts alone). Maybe "Tiger Shark" will make it more realistic, I don't know. But all in all, great work, and I hope I'll see more of Drake in the near future.
Excellent story!
Very nicely written, and awesome character development. I like the relationship between Drake and Falcon, from frying each other's butt to saving each other's butt. And I love it when you put technical jargons. It shows that you do your homework well.
Just for your information, "Great White Shark" is an antisocial rogue. It's highly unlikely that we'll find a shark den full of GWS (remember Jaws? GWS hunts alone). Maybe "Tiger Shark" will make it more realistic, I don't know. But all in all, great work, and I hope I'll see more of Drake in the near future.
6/9/2003 c2 2cball
Great story. I like the original character development. Hopefully you will write some more stories about this character. But the best part of the story was Falcon. He is one of my favorites characters. I love to see stories with Falcon in them. I enjoyed the interaction between Falcon and Luxen.
Good job
Great story. I like the original character development. Hopefully you will write some more stories about this character. But the best part of the story was Falcon. He is one of my favorites characters. I love to see stories with Falcon in them. I enjoyed the interaction between Falcon and Luxen.
Good job