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1/2 c16 5Padfoot Starfyre
Happy New Year, 2021.
Of course Aoi plays the part of the fashionaista, and invested wholeharltly in showing Misaki and Takumi that they are fated as a couple.
A very close call for Takumi, since Gerard has caught on that Takumi is pulling his own game.
So first they need to get rid of evidence. Meaning Takumi needs to eliminate the trap, and change his clothing. Quickly.
Either way I think there is going to be a confrintation, but Takumi has had enough to this nonsence, so he can stand up for himself and free himself.
1/2 c16 Habiba Elwasely
This is an amazing fanfic... Please continue..
12/25/2020 c15 Padfoot Starfyre
Hmm... Looks like "Two Can Play That Game (2001)",might have been worked onto this too.
I would think the costume ball is going to get very interesting now. Espaecially because both Takumi and Misaki have thier own plans to play out.
Merry Christmas, and happy Holidays. Take care, and stay safe.
12/19/2020 c14 Padfoot Starfyre
Well, the pieces of the puzzle finally began to fall into place.
Now only for Takumi and Misaki to work things out.
However I do think Takumi needs to be cautious of his family interfering, and Misaki does need to watch her back for nefarious deeds, just as Takumi should. Though Takumi does need to stand up for himself, and free himself.
12/18/2020 c14 Guest
ONG a thank you so much for updating! She finally realized
12/17/2020 c13 James Birdsong
Cool fanfic obviously
12/5/2020 c12 Padfoot Starfyre
Oh, This chapter is good, an amalgamation of several references.
Also, the more Takumi tries to find some sort of contact to Misaki, the more he finds that his self-control is lost. The interruptions and his sense of losing his self-control leads to the hesitation, but powered by the attraction, and the bonds.
Don't forget the deja-vu, and memories of what their relationship is/was.
11/27/2020 c11 Padfoot Starfyre
Thank you for the honor.
A wonderful chapter, with Misaki recalling the link between the red stapler, and her starting to recognize through Usui Takumi's alias, along with what their relationship was.
Takumi is playing along with the Walker's ploy, all while plotting his own plan. Mind you, I think the use of all the alias, may backfire somewhat.
11/27/2020 c11 lambrose
AWWW... The red stapler... I think I'm pretty attatched to it. This was beautiful! c:
11/23/2020 c10 6Jui2014
Wow I love seeing Misaki as that strong business woman, and bless Aoi for paying the cupid. She couldn't recognise Takumi? Just how big of a makeover did you give him? XD
Feels good to be finally able to catch up, great job as always. :)
11/21/2020 c10 Padfoot Starfyre
*grumbles about Fanfic being finicky, and typo monsters.* Autocorrect is being a pain again, and the type monster is back again. That should have been "Walker", not 'Walked'.
Noting you have been using show and movies for titles and plot themes, and I understand you have a few already laid out, Would it possible to consider adding: 'Top Gun,1986'?
Have a safe US Thanksgiving, and take care.
11/21/2020 c10 5Padfoot Starfyre
One. Aoi's investment in fashion, and matchmaking, particularly in Misaki and Takumi's end, has no bounds.
Two. Aoi's interests are on cute things, and fashion.
Three. Takumi has always been bad with confronting things, and also with keeping his control of his emotions. He can keep up a facade of neutrality in the face of publicity, but on the indie he's uncomfortable. Thus, in his inability to fully break free from Gerald, and the Walked grasp. Which leaves them as seeing, and using him as nothing more than a pawn.
Four. I think having not seen or heard of each other, after such a long time, makes it difficult to acknowledge someone at first. Even so, I would have thought that there were hints of what their past relationship was.
Five. I think using alias names, does have some merit in keeping incognito
11/20/2020 c10 lambrose
Takumi having Sebastian as his name? Lol that's funny. I can't imagine him having any other name other than Takumi Usui. AND OMG THEY WERE JUST ABOUT TO KISS. AND I LOVE AOI SO MUCH! This always brings a smile on my face! It was wonderful!
11/15/2020 c9 4urbyq
Hmm, can one comment on one’s story? To respond to the review by Guest, Misaki is still majority owner of her company and has enough equity that the others can’t band together to vote her out or overrule her decisions, but they can be annoying with pressure tactics. The investors have seen great growth in the past and are getting greedy, wanting more and more. Pretty typical to have unrealistic expectations of unsustainable growth, plus I needed a plot device ;)
11/15/2020 c9 Padfoot Starfyre
Re: the Guest commenter seen below, My understanding of it is that. Misaki worked the way up the business and investor ladder in her own. That would mean her her degrees in business, and law, though not without her having those that supported and investing in her cause.
Still that would mean she would have suppotors, business partners and contracts. So yes, she would have supporters, sponsors, along with competition and rivals.
Even so as the founder and CEO, of AWA Consulting Group, she would have key corporate Shares for the company. Or so I would expect. Because of ownership.
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