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9/19/2020 c4 Marie
Magnifique chapitre j’ai le sentiment que cette coach va remettre Walter sur le bon chemin
Beau travail merci
9/9/2020 c3 Margaret Gautier
I have the jest of the story, but I agree it is hard to follow. Walter and Ralph spoke at 5pm. Ralph let Walter know, that he misses him, and he has slipped down, in grades at school, but he can get back on track, since he has spoke with his best friend
Walter tells him of a project, that the two can do togather. Auto Mechanics, that will provide compressed energy, and provide a green environment. The winner of the contest will win a large amount of Swiss $$.
Ralph asks his mom, if he could go
to the garage to work with Walter.
Paige speaks to the Centipede group. This is when the translation gets confusing. I think the translator has a problem with gender pronouns, reversing the male for female, and the latter part of story was a little rough.
The story is good,but if it were written by someone in English, it would be be much smoother.
9/9/2020 c3 Guest
i dont know if it is the person translating this but i am lost nothing made sense some sentences were either not complete or just did not make ant sense.
9/9/2020 c3 Marie
Merci beaucoup pour ce chapitre Ralph et Walter ensemble c’est trop bien
9/2/2020 c2 Margaret Gautier
I really like your story. I hope you keep writing
9/1/2020 c2 Marie
Superbe deuxième chapitre Walter et Ralph sont géniaux merci
9/1/2020 c2 Margaret Gautier
The continued story is very good. I enjoyed reading it. It Wii be interesting to know if Richard Ellis has the island project for both Centipede and Scorpion.
8/29/2020 c1 Margaret Gautier
Your story has a good start, and is looks very promising. Looking forward to more chapters.
8/29/2020 c1 franxine bobo
i wish ralph was a lot older and really told her off how in the hell she thought walter of all people cheated and why did toby not insure her he did not and happy knows walter better than anyone and still accused him of doing something hanky and sly with his rotunda ass had a lot of nerve i wish someone would write that walter picked himself up formed a new team and found someone how really loves him. Good writing just check your pronouns
8/29/2020 c1 Marie
Superbe début d’histoire bien écrit et belle intrigue
Merci et à bient?t
8/30/2020 c1 stydia waige
est ce que tu va faire une suite
8/29/2020 c1 52Grykon
Very nice start! Looking forward to the next chapter, thank you for writing.

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