9/10 c1 4Mafiapartner2
Just so you know, you spelled "Shepard" wrong. It's spelled "Shepherd" Otherwise, good story.
Just so you know, you spelled "Shepard" wrong. It's spelled "Shepherd" Otherwise, good story.
8/30 c3 Savysapphire
Some constructive criticism here, leave out some of the pointless facts, examples like the conversation about how much more fur some had than others, as it doesn't really contribute to the story. Other than that iv'e read all of your stories and enjoy them. Cheers!
Some constructive criticism here, leave out some of the pointless facts, examples like the conversation about how much more fur some had than others, as it doesn't really contribute to the story. Other than that iv'e read all of your stories and enjoy them. Cheers!
8/30 c3 Marshall V2018
I really hope the pups are not mad at Ryder. Just an idea-You should have Ryder get attacked by something. Great chapter.
I really hope the pups are not mad at Ryder. Just an idea-You should have Ryder get attacked by something. Great chapter.