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12/17/2020 c2 James Birdsong
Cool two chapters
12/5/2020 c2 Minniemiss123
And here it is. This is how it ends. How it is sometimes. That was so painstakingly true. And i loved it. It was pure. If only she had the courage to resiprocate. If only. But she was scared. She was scared of commitment and to give in to her feelings and so it ends with them beibg apart forever. Maybe in some other time and space, if they meet again, she would forget about everythung else abd submit to her feelings for once. Loved it!
11/26/2020 c2 10MystearicaBlaze
Horrible weeping, ugly sobbing on my part.
This was show-stopper amazingly heart-wrechingly angsty and beautiful. I loved it so so so much
11/26/2020 c2 Habiba Elwasely
Just... whyyyy?!
11/25/2020 c2 lambrose
Awww I love Takumi's pov just as much as Misaki's and reading it made me wanna cry. This is wonderful! I'm looking forward to more!
11/25/2020 c2 4urbyq
Why do we let ourselves be constrained by the imposed societal definitions? Too many false assumptions getting in the way. Life is hard enough without needing one to put barriers in one’s own way. Now you need a 3rd chapter from the POV of an observer watching this idiot couple.
9/16/2020 c1 3JiyaSh27
I liked it and i hated it. Stop playing with ma emotions jui (T T)
9/5/2020 c1 Tee
This kinda reminds me of Patricia and Yuu's situation
9/4/2020 c1 laurencemendozaodi
i hate it, why they did not end up together.
8/31/2020 c1 7CutesyCoco
so sadddd :( but i love it regardless. fantastic!
8/31/2020 c1 Shy Snicker
I loved it 3
8/28/2020 c1 RylieT
This was awesome!
8/27/2020 c1 Minniemiss123
This was crazy! I loved the non conversational approach that you used here it suited so well here. How could she not notice the subtle clues he gave her, that if not more, he liked her just the way she did. But she was dense enough to ignore his approaches. I can't wait to hear takumi's side of this story, if that's in the plan. Would love to see it proceed. :)
8/25/2020 c1 MystearicaBlaze
Okay, I'm sorry, I didn't realize it's not marked as complete and the way my heart soared, yes yes yesssssss. I remember being halfway thru and going back to check the genre and my heart had dropped but now I'm super excited! Yayyyy!
8/25/2020 c1 10MystearicaBlaze
I woke up to read this and I'm bawling my eyes out. How can something that started with so much fluff end up with so much angst? I know it's meant to be a one-shot and that's just how it is but angsty endings give me actual anxiety - brb crying. But then again, I love how you didn't need to go into detail to perfectly portray what Misaki was feeling but when she said - Even their names didn't go together - I unleashed an ocean of waterworks. This was so so so good but at the same time I'm in so much pain, I can't- This was wonderful and you're an absolute stunner of a storyteller! Loved it!
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