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12/23 c16 deity of death1
And here, after a long stretch of time, deity presents her long-await review! Omg, this week was so hectic but now I am free~ (well… until next week…-cries-).

-Ooh, I see we’re opening with Hiei’s point of view. Nice choice! I’ve been burning to see how Botan’s been doing, but this builds so much anticipation. Whatcha gonna do now, Hiei?!

-Great buildup to the stalker-identity-reveal! The fact that you gave us general info about Yusuke busting the underground fighting ring and then later reveal that Botan (along with others) had been there naturally to help, made me think of those crime drama flashbacks/camera recordings where you see what generally played out, but the important details are there if only you zoom in/pay attention. I got goosebumps!

-Ohh, goddang, I totally thought this scene was after all that happened in the previous chapter, but I see this too is a playback! Oh no, Hiei still doesn’t quite know the heightened danger Botan is in. But oh yes for us readers, who get to witness his reaction of the event. X3

-“I’m waiting outside for you, just as you asked.” I’m reliving reading this scene all over again, and experiencing twice the trauma from Hiei’s point of view, seeing all the red flags. OTL

-Oh shit, the GPS in Botan’s necklace isn’t working?! Did Toguro really disable it?! Are we really SOL?!

-Yeah no, Haru, no splitting up! Ooof, Hiei’s realization when looking upon the ocean-floor note gave me chiiilllsss. The way you describe Haru’s white knuckles on the steering wheel and the way Hiei can feel his heart thumping in his ears is so good! I’m like completely there with them both; I can even feel my posture tensing up. TT_TT

-Oh no, Hiei’s falling into the “all my fault” pit! Now’s not the time, child! But then again, there is some truth in that…

-“She was so much more than that. In such a short amount of time, she managed to weave her way into his heart. She was embedded so deeply in his soul that he didn’t realize just how central she was to him until she was gone.” This was so beautiful, Mysti! TT_TT

-“He couldn’t let her flame be snuffed out. He wouldn’t allow it. Not while he still had breath in his lungs and a heart that echoed her name.” AHHH, OMG, MY HEART IS BURSTING WITH HIEI’S LOVE AND DEDICATION, AND YOUR KNACK FOR BEAUTIFUL SOUL-WRENCHING LINES.

-The yin charm on his phone! Such a nice detail for him to remember and still continue to cherish it.

-Oooh, Botan’s perspective! -steels myself- Okay, let’s go! Oh no, she’s tied up… the scent of saltwater and the sound of the sea (over her thundering heart) was such a great line to indicate her environment!

-Botan is so brave, you go girl! Oof, Toguro’s answer to her question made me nope out of there. How do you even try to reason with a person like that? The more he speaks of his reasons, the more we can see the depths of his depravity. It makes me shiver because although his ideals are extreme, I can imagine human beings just like him (and worse) in the real world.

-Welp, at least he confirmed he was a horrible bastard. I don’t know why that moment made me laugh. XP

-Even Toguro can see the love between Hiei and Botan. (Take note of this Botan! It’s -that- obvious! If even a psychopath can see it, then that bodes well for you both! … Then again, he was an obsessive stalker sooo…)

-Arghhh, he took off the necklace, not because he suspected it of being a tracker, but because he could sense it was a precious gift! Omg. I’m not sure if that’s a good or bad thing, that it is now with Toguro directly, instead of Botan.

-FUUU—he knew it was a tracker all along, never mind. And now he’s cutting into her forearm for fun?! He really doesn’t disappoint when it comes to his promises… Hiei and Haru, where you guys at?!

-I hope not too much time has passed! Oh gosh, just hearing Botan’s agonized screams is awful. I’m sure that moment was seared into Hiei’s mind for all of eternity. I feel so terrible for Botan, but I feel a little more relieved that the crew is here to save her. Nice call with the choice to go to Tsukushima, Hiei! I don’t even want to think about if they chose the other site…

-Ooof, Hiei just tackled Toguro! Definitely don’t give him any time to react! I hope Haru is tending to Botan while Hiei’s skirmishing with Toguro. Omg, it escalated quickly to Hiei pulling out his gun. No, please don’t be tempted, Hiei! I know it’s hard, but resist! I dunno if you’ve seen the crime thriller movie Se7en with Brad Pitt and Morgan Freeman, but I had sinking déjà vu with this scene. Phew, okay, Botan pulled Hiei back to his senses. -fans self-

-Oh shit, Hiei’s so savage with that pistol-whip. I panicked as soon as Toguro showed signs of realization and desperation, so it’s good Hiei took initiative to calm him down. I’m so glad he’s been cuffed and that the knife is far, far away.

-Oh Botan, my heart breaks that there are many shallow cuts. I can’t imagine how much time elapsed between Toguro starting his torture and the guys busting their way in. I’m sure the time in between was full of suffering and a painful kind of hope that Hiei will find his way over, even as the seconds ticked by in silence.

-“I know it will be” is such a beautiful, hopeful response, especially after such a traumatic event. I really admire Botan’s optimism, but more than that, her belief in Hiei.

-Aww, Koenma was at her bedside! And Yusuke too! Oh no… Botan is now going through Hiei’s similar “all my fault” moment again… TT_TT I love that Yusuke ends up being the one keeping her grounded and reminding Botan to keep it easy on herself.

-“she felt like a little girl in her friend’s arms again.” Aww! I love the level of comfort and history and general level of -safety- this line implies.

-Oii, everyone is here; where you at, Hiei?! Oh Botan, of course you have many reasons to be grateful… Hiei will come over when he’s ready.

-The starchy hospital bed sheets are a nice touch! Koenma’s the MVP for helping her get a bigger room. XP And Shizuru even sprayed some of her perfume to cover the telltale hospital-smell! Aww, and Kuwabara with his smuggled snacks, and Yusuke remembering to return her abandoned cell phone (with the charm still there)! Botan’s friends are the best. 3

-Haha, that angry emoji next to Hiei’s name is the cutest! Yo Hiei, don’t reprimand people when it was you who called in the first place, you big doofus. -rolls eyes- But I love how this chapter ended, with Hiei staying on the line with Botan until she fell asleep. This is just so quietly romantic, it makes my heart ache. Such a nice ending to such a rocky, terrifying, rollercoaster of a chapter. With Hiei now realizing the feeling he’s feeling is love, and with nearly experiencing Botan’s loss, I’m sure he’s still grappling with how to approach her (and vice versa).

I know they still got a lot to do (Botan with recovering and Hiei with case file details), but this is the first time in this story where I felt so much comfort and contentment at the end of a chapter. ) This was such a great way to end my day in bed (terrified at first, but totally at peace at the end and just as ready for bed as Botan, hahaha). Thank you yet again for an amazing chapter and a great resolution to the Toguro-predicament, Mysti!
12/12 c16 keke saiyan
I love this story! I read Home all the way through and i loved the ending of that one, but I kept finding myself wondering how this alternate timeline Hiei and Botan Got together and how they dealt with the stalker situation that was mentioned in the previous story. I was hyped to see this pop up and I was so ready to read it. You did not disappoint! I can’t wait to see the conclusion of the story! Please forgive me if there’s any spelling errors. I am visually impaired so it’s hard for me to see these things.
12/10 c16 blackboldbeuaty
awww. hiei finally realizes his feelings!
12/10 c16 Eva Plank
Thank you for updating the chapter early, I loved it, I can't wait to read more.
12/9 c16 Blueflamingos91
BRUHHH! im so relieved Hiei got to Botan in time! all 16 chapters were literally incredible so far, this is such a smile inducing fanfic...and I cant wait to read the rest of it. I'll be waiting patiently-ish
12/9 c16 2ReaperDemon
Jumping right into the action! Hell yeah!

Can't say it didn't pain me to see Hiei so freaked out over Botan being taken, but it was great that both Haru and Hiei wasted no time, used the evidence that they had been taunted with for so long, and Hiei made the snap decision to go to Tsukishima. I really can't imagine how fucking awful that must feel, hearing a loved one being attacked and kidnapped and not being able to do anything about it right away though... jeez. And for Hiei of all people to be feeling like that, Botan must mean the absolute world to him. Of course, with Hiei straight up saying that he's in love with her, amazing sentence btw, we know that Botan does indeed mean everything to him, and Hiei won't stop until he gets her back.

And it's so scary how realistic this type of thing is. You can be as careful and planning as you could possibly be, and in one instance slip up, and everything go to ruin. At the drop of a hat, Toguro Ani was able so snatch Botan up with that super creepy and scummy phone app to trick Botan into thinking Hiei was waiting on her. And I can't believe shit like that is actually real and not suuuuuuper illegal. Or if it is illegal, how it's even accessible in any fashion. But I'm going off topic. Toguro is one sick sum'bitch... which leads us into the next part.

Dude has Botan tied up, cutting her all over with a knife, and is practically orgasmic at the idea that he's murdered four other women before Botan. I give Botan all the credit in the world for being as brave and tough as she was during a situation that would have most making a mess. And just when we thought that there may have been a bright point in this whole situation, with Toguro keeping the tracking device so that Hiei could find her... we learn that he's already disabled it! Ugh. He may be a twist shit, but he's not stupid.

Thank god for Hiei's instinct though! First for leading him to the ocean-side because of that creepy song lyric Toguro sent, but for also selecting the correct direction to run in when coming to that line of warehouses. And as weird as this is to say... if not for Toguro taking a sick pleasure in torturing his victims before he kills them and making Botan scream out in pain by cutting her, Hiei and Haru may not have found Botan in time to rescue her. And what a quick and efficient rescue it was! In a hostage situation like this, you have to do things fast before it gets ugly, so I was delighted to see Hiei kick down that door and tackle Toguro before he could hurt Botan again. And I won't lie... I was taking the utmost pleasure in seeing Hiei beat the living shit out of Toguro for a minute there... even if Toguro himself seemed to be getting off on the pain of it.

But then things got realer than real when Hiei pulled out his gun and put it to Toguro's head. Again.. I was kind of wanting him to pull the trigger... but I think this scene perfectly shows just how much Botan means to Hiei, but also speaks volumes of Botan's character. Even after being stalked by this sick bastard for months, terrorized, kidnapped, and stabbed by him... she still tries to stop Hiei from taking Toguro's life. Botan stopped Hiei from becoming an un(just) killer, but also assured that Toguro would face the proper consequences for his actions, and rot in prison for the rest of his lonely, miserable existence. Now THAT really shook him up to hear, and that was one of the more satisfying aspects of the chapter for me... and the follow up pistol-whip from Hiei. But in the end, Toguro is caught, and Botan is mostly safe! Though Hiei and Botan's scene together was sadly too short, it's understandable that given her wounds, she'd pass out while Hiei was holding her.

You know, I've always had to wonder just why hospitals needed to have such brutally bright lights in the rooms of patients while they're sleeping. That must have sucked waking up with those glaring in Botan's eyes... but at least she's waking up! And not alone in a dingy warehouse, but in a hospital with her best friends waiting to see her. Those were touching scenes with Koenma and Yusuke supporting Botan, and in Yusuke's case, telling her to never blame herself for Toguro's twisted actions; none of that was the poor girl's fault in any way. Thankfully she seemed to accept Yusuke's words as fact; like he said, he's always right! And I was happy to see Shizuru and everyone else was there waiting on Botan to wake up to, even breaking visiting hour rules because of Koenma's connections. Good on him for that perk for sure.

But alas... the one person Botan wants to see most isn't there. And I completely understand her "selfish" wants in that moment... but at least Yusuke was able to sneak Botan her slightly damaged phone. And though Hiei is stuck at the office wrapping things up on the Toguro case, I'm very happy that he called her. Also find it hilarious that his name has an angry face next to it on her contacts hahaha. But yes, even though she can't see him, getting to talk to him is just as good, and it was really sweet of Hiei to stay on the phone with Botan until she fell asleep.

Great chapter Mysti! We're close to wrapping up now, and it's been a hell of a ride so far, and am happy that Botan is out of any kind of danger!
12/9 c16 jtdarkman
Somehow I knew it would be toguro lol. Side note I'm glad I'm not the only 1 who's had to do the stay on the phone with me till I go to sleep thing lol its kinda cute and very hard to do sometimes lol
12/9 c16 10LonelyDreamer7
Aaahhh i was screaming! The scene with Big bro toguro just torturing Botan was having me kn a frenzy to sucker punch him from my phone screen D: but I’m glad that our boys were there to get Botan! I’m glad that at least that mess is over and done with cause oh boo the stress of it all everyone was dealing with!
12/9 c16 96FireStorm1991
Thank goodness for Hiei's intuition that told him exactly where to go. Nice way to tie in the Jagan without it. Jeez, Toguro really was sick. So would he have let her go if he did like her? Doubtbit but yikes... I figured he liked the light and that's why he went after them, not to see it go out. Creep... well at least that's over. I really did think Hiei would kill him, especially after recognizing his feelings for Botan... but thennhe got her help and went ti the station. Poor Botan had no idea that's where he was at first so I could understand her being disappointed. It's funny how they both wanted to talk to each other, to hear each other's voices, and yet he told her to rest. Even though he called her. lol. Silly, but adorable. Can't wait to see where the rest of this goes. Is Botan going to try to go back to her apartment? Will Hiei stop her first with a confession? Will he apologize for being so distant? We already know he's blaming himself. Anyways, you already know my demands of cuddles, so I will be patient. lol. Great chapter :)
12/9 c3 8Always-MIA-Anouk
Oh damn, I love how you've written this chapter, it's detailed and yet leave a lot of room for imagination. Botan honestly annoyed me a tad bit by how reckless she can be, but towards the end I began to feel empathetic towards her. I think if Hiei stopped to think the same was I did as the story progressed I'm sure for the life of me that he'd be nicer?

But I love Haru and Hiei's dynamic, it's very fun and cheerful, above all even though Hiei looks like either he wants to rip his hair out or pull out haru's throat, there is not denying that he respects him too much.

Poor botan, she's used to a certain way of life and now she's confined to the bounds of home and the threat of this serial killer isn't making it better. Each time there is a knock at the door or the door opens, I swear my heart skips a beat.
Special mention to Kurama for just being the real MVP on this chapter, now I'm hungry *crying*

I love the pacing and how well you've charted out this story. Having said that I absolutely enjoyed it. Now onto the next chappie.

Lots of love
You know who :3
12/9 c2 Always-MIA-Anouk
Honestly I thought I had read this chapter already, clearly I'm way off my mark
Nevertheless, it begins, the cohabitation, I mean the investigation
Honestly I'm glad Koenma put them on different cases. Also I wanna see more of the tension that Hiei and Koenma may or may not have

Haru as always was a charmer I swear if it weren't for him, Hiei wouldn't be eternally single and deceased, this is funny cause I keep forgetting Haru is an OC.

I'm excited for the future chapters, let the shenanigans begin.

Lots of love
You know who
12/7 c15 heartluv
Danggg poor Botan :(. Hope Hiei comes rushing over soon!
12/6 c15 blackboldbeuaty
loved it!
12/6 c15 deity of death1
Mysti, Happy Birthdaaayyyy! Hope you get to relax and eat lots ‘o delicious food on this special day! (well-granted, it’s around midnight around here so once you wake up and start your day!)

Onto da review!

-Uhoh, playful grin on Yusuke’s face always bodes ill for the receiver. Fortify yourself, Botan! “…Keiko already told me everything.” Hahahaha, Keiko’s quite dependable. Omg, and those meetings about unity and collaboration. OTL Feels like a Monday after a super short weekend all right. TT_TT

-“I had you all figured out back at the cabin, remember?” HMMM, you sure about that Yusuke? … Actually, I shouldn’t doubt him so much. XP Yusuke’s quite observant when he wants to be. X3

-“I see Keiko told you -everything-.” LMAO, YES! I mean, Botan, whaddaya expect Yusuke’s mind to go to once he discovers a man and a woman are “sleeping” together, no matter how innocent the situation actually is in real life?! XD

-I actually like Yusuke’s no-nonsense stance in this sense. It definitely makes him appear wiser beyond his years. And I like how he kinda dismisses the possible ramifications of such a confession, because it implies that he knows (and he wants Botan to know) that regardless of what happens, everything will be okay. Or it just implies he feels confident that Hiei feels the same way, and is quite impatient at all their dilly-dallying. :3

-“If that’s the plan, then you’ll probably want to stop looking at him like you want to jump his bones.” Hahaha, oh Yusuke, you have such a talent of turning the atmosphere of a conversation around for the better.

-OMG, “I can’t help it… he’s just so hot.” Lmao, the candidness with how Botan speaks! Welp, I admire the matter-of-fact way she said it, with no shame, because GIRL IT’S TRUE! XD Bahahaha, I mean what does Yusuke expect when his earlier question to her was, “Girl, you hookin’ up with him yet?”

-Meanwhile, what is Haru doing instigating and making Hiei jealous over nothing? XD Is this a plan that everyone’s playing into, over Botan and Hiei’s oblivious heads? ‘Cause if it is, I’m all for it. XP Lmao, Haru and Yusuke are working hard as wingmen this chapter, and I’m living for it!

-Yes Hiei, be selfish for once! God knows you’re actually quite selfless most of the time. Haru, give that man a few more nudges, he seems awfully close to the edge-of-no-return and may need just a liiittle more help. X3

-This is the week! I’m so glad to hear Koenma and Yusuke are checking in frequently, even if it’s annoying to everyone else to debrief so often. There is so much at stake!

-Oh Hiei, he shut that girl down in a snap! The three dots appearing during texting is such a great, relatable touch. XP I would be floundering on how to reply if I were Botan too. Maybe Hiei’s terse answer comes from being on edge about the stalker issue (any day now) and on what to do re: his feelings for Botan,

-“He would’ve gone without all those conditions, but Botan didn’t need to know that.” No, Botan! Just give Hiei enough time and he’ll say yes. XD Then again, Hiei has quite a lot of good bonuses from this. He’ll probably help with the cooking and laundry anyways since I’m sure he’d feel bad eventually for making Botan do it, but hey, it’s the thought that counts!

-Botan sending him lots of happy faces over text is the cutest thing ever. And Hiei -not- smiling (uh-huh :3 ) in response is adorable!

-Yeahhhh, storm scents! Doesn’t it smell/feel kinda electric right before a storm? Not really sure how to describe it… But ughh, cuddling at home during a storm is the best thing ever! Get to it, Botan! Assert yo’self! D:

-Shizuru is so kind to give away tickets, even if it’s not really her thing in the first place. Ooh, and an extra bottle of sake! Okay, sake cuddle sesh! Pfft, Hiei took the bottle from her just like that. XP

-“Hiei had no business being that attractive”—hell yeah! “…she pushed those thoughts aside in favor of at least appearing to be unaffected.” Hmm, not quite sure if it’s convincing to anyone except Botan herself and Hiei. XD

-Yesss, take-out wine potential cuddling or maybe spill-the-beans session! Botan looks super cute (am a big fan of tapered pants)! And Hiei with his tie loosened and sleeves rolled up is the best imagery of this chapter yet.

-“she melted against the couch with a lazy smile.” Oooh, Botan, are you feeling the effects of the sake yet? I’m so eager to hear a less inhibited convo from them both under the influence. X3

-Love the small details of proof of Botan’s move-in from various knickknacks around the house, especially her shoes outnumbering Hiei’s!

-Oh no, third round so soon? Of course, Botan would take it as a challenge. OTL “Her head was a little fuzzy, but her emotions were as clear as day.” -gasp- …. Are we heading in the direction I think we’re heading?! “With Hiei so close, she wondered why she continued to hold herself back.” OMG. IS IT?!

-“Hey.” HAHAHA, I got goosebumps, like wow, are we really gonna go for it here, Botan?! Why do I feel tipsy reading this… Lmao, you make it so easy to get into Botan’s inebriated head! WAIT, SHE JUST DID IT?! MYSTI, DID BOTAN REALLY JUST LAY A SOLID ONE ON HIEI JUST NOW?! I thought she was gonna go for a confession, not for the holy grail kiss! Omg! Lemme go back and read tha—YES, SHE DAMN WELL DID. HOLY SHYYEEETTT, HOW MANY CHAPTERS HAVE I WAITED FOR THIS MOMENT?!

-I was so scared to see how Hiei would react to the spontaneous kiss, but to see him react instantaneously and just as into it as Botan, gives me so much relief. I’m sure this was the straw that broke the camel’s back! And for all of Hiei’s restraint and his “master-of-my-soul/fate”/dominant-way-of-being, it’s kinda hot that he’s all for Botan taking control.

-Ohohoho, you know once you get pulled onto a man’s lap, it’s serious! Ho-ly crap, this is all going so fast for me, but in such a good way, in like “shit, I didn’t realize this would be the moment, so much in happening in one paragraph, omgggg.” I loovveee all your descriptions of the tactile! It really makes me feel like I’m in the moment, with the “weight of his solid body” and the “intensity of his sharp gaze” and the “headiness of his scent” and the “fire of his touch.” It’s hot but it’s beautiful too! TT_TT “Wrapped up in his arms, she never felt more desired or more wanted.” This is like the pinnacle of physical intimacy! Sometimes there’s really nothing better than truly feeling wanted, and being able to reciprocate and demonstrate that very same feeling for your partner.

-Ughhh, did her phone really just ring?! Can we seriously not have nice things?! ;_; It was really good, and was even getting better! Lmao, that was like a bucket of cold water on all of us readers. TT_TT

-Oh… no… Hiei… I can’t even imagine what he’s thinking right now. -siiighhh- You know, once this is all over with the stalker-dude, he really has no more excuses. But dang, Hiei, you could totally be honest to Botan about how you feel and what went down last night, while ALSO reiterating that for the time being, you both need to focus on the situation at hand. But what does he do?! Totally pretends it was something that happened just ‘cause they both had a little too much to drink. Newsflash Hiei, it wasn’t the wine—if Botan were replaced by any other person on the team, then I guarantee you what happened last night would -not- have happened even if all y’all were drunk as hell. But, I’m sure he knows that. TT_TT So stubborn, that man.

-Oh Haru, mediator in all this. I feel so bad for Botan, being blown off like this. Of course Hiei’s thoughts and reasonings make sense and it’s understandable that he needs some space to think, but without communicating all that to Botan, he just comes off as cold and I’m sure her imagination is going wild with all the worst-case scenarios. It’s so hard to have a passionate moment like that where you feel wanted, and have it be followed by what is essentially a dismissal that makes you feel completely unwanted and like anything that happened before doesn’t matter now. OTL

-Ohhhh, holy shit, the call! Wait, he wouldn’t have received this if he had gone out to originally meet Botan, or if he had tagged with Haru in the end. Is this a good or bad thing?! HMMM, Hiei, let someone know where you’re going and who you’re meeting! I feel like as women, it’s second-nature to do this since the world is a hostile place to women in general, but Hiei shouldn’t overestimate his abilities! I feel so high-strung right now, omg. We’re close, aren’t we?

-“…drew on his eternally low reserve of patience.” I don’t know why this made me laugh during such a serious scene! XP Yep, Hiei has the patience of a saint during matters like these when he desperately needs something.

-So Hiei knows now? I’d try to make a guess except I still feel unsure about the culprit… It’s good Mitari was able to get some clear shots of the stalker’s face. Would the stalker have been aware or suspicious? I’m not sure if he stalked Botan enough to know that Mitari was a neighbor and to be wary of him… Anyways, Mitari’s in some nefarious group and I’m glad Hiei gave him the big-brother concerned talk. I’m sure the talk and the support (letting him know he’s available for help should he need it) helped Mitari. It’s hard to leave any toxic environment without people on the outside encouraging you and providing resources.

-I’m not sure if it’s against case protocol, but I was hoping Hiei would at least give Botan some info about the status of the case, just to ease her worries. Although with how hesitant he’s been when it comes to interacting with her in general, I guess this was unlikely to happen. OTL

-Oh gosh, I know it’s sososo easy to blame yourself Botan, but he kissed you back! Followed by many other things! XD So no, you should know that kissing him did -not- ruin anything!

-Oof, tonight was Madarame’s art exhibit?! Ahhh, what a night to blow off Botan. But then again, I’m sure Hiei and Haru are making lots of good progress with the case. Oh wait, Hiei’s calling her outside? Why do I feel a bit of suspicion since it seems too soon… Fuuuu—if she’s not spotting Hiei, then this is a BAD sign. Girl, get back in the apartment! Don’t wait for anyone outside, especially when it’s dark, and especially when this is the week your stalker usually goes out and gets his victims! OH HELL—he didn’t send that message, so how da hell did the stalker (I’m assuming the stalker) get it?! OMG. OMG. OMG. She’s been drugged unconscious?! Though I gotta say, the ending scene with her blacking out and Hiei’s panicked voice through the receiver is such a great cliffhanger. Ughhh, why am I reading this at night again… OTL Be calm my heart, I gotta look up more cat videos now. Haru, where’s your recommended cat video playlist?!

Even though I’m feeling mighty disturbed right now with this cliffhanger, I also feel a sense of relief? There has been so much anticipation and build-up in the past chapters that we all kinda knew time was running out and that Botan (and Hiei) would eventually have to face off against this guy. I’m looking forward (well, maybe that’s not the phrase I’m looking for right now…) to seeing their interactions in the next chapter, learn about his reasons, and see how Botan and Hiei navigate this life-or-death scenario! Thank you again for such an amazing, rollercoaster of chapter, Mysti! I swear to god, it’s like my blood pressure has been spiking for the past two or three chapters. XP Happy Birthday once again-have an amazing and magical day today! -throws so much confetti-
12/6 c15 Eliii.xx
What a tease with that steamy scene! Ughhh that creep toguro , I’m so sadscared he actually got to Botanbut I’m dying to read hieis reaction!
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