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3/29 c1 18Beetles-Sanban
Ahhh, man... :)

First of all, fun fact: I look through your stuff every now and then because, quite simply, you’re an excellent writer. I really love your narration style, it just... It just flows so well!

Second of all: I really enjoyed this one. You already write the characters really well to begin with, but I especially love how you could do so much with so little! That little tidbit about Squall looking blankly at Rinoa? Swoon. And that bit at the end? Hot. This definitely deserves an occasional reread, so thanks so much for this gift!

As always, I thoroughly enjoyed your work! Great job!
3/13 c1 x Euphoria
Oh my goshhh. This one-shot is jam packed with everything! I honestly haven't read many stories with interactions between Rinoa and Irvine but I must say I am lovinggg it.

I admire the way you write the cast of FF8. It's so fluid and when I'm reading it's just like so smooth. The story just flows so nicely. I was done with this before I knew it and i wanted more ;_;.

Ah this was so great though. Thank you!
12/22/2020 c1 9LaylaEvercrest
I'm like fist pumping the air by the end of this. O.M.G. I enjoyed the bantering sooo much and your Irvine/Rinoa are so great together. Rust, washed up lives, and bitterness is so excellent for FH and I laughed out loud the by the "No-stray Galbadian hanger-oners." I kind of forgot that they had this shared connection which is why Irvine's list was perfection. Plus his hints of knowing more is so well done that I wished it had made it into the game in this way. Well done!
9/6/2020 c1 16SilentStarlightSky
Haha, nail polish remover. Yea, hard liquor can take some getting used to, but why bother? Irvine hinting about what he knows was a nice touch. And joking about Irvine and Rinoa being together was funny. I can't even imagine that pairing, other than as a joke. Oh, and I love it how Rinoa thought the GF memory loss was a wacky conspiracy theory.

And my favorite part was Squall's aloof jealousy. (It reminded me of a cat getting jealous when you pay attention to another cat.) And the awkward flirting tension at the end was fun too. All that smiling and hair flicking.
9/5/2020 c1 9Rydia Pryde
Oh Irvine, far more clever than you let anyone see. I love the little hints Irvine is giving about the fact that he knows the Orphanage gang but they don't realize it.
Zell's disapproval- is that really over the alcohol or because he's worried about Rinoa? I love that he was wearing his uniform. Great one-shot :)
9/4/2020 c1 Rebekka
Really, really loved the story!
9/4/2020 c1 41Emerald-Latias
I really like this idea of Rinoa and Irvine just hanging out in this slice of life moment taking in observations in FH. I feel like when he's not on his bull, Irvine's a pretty insightful kind of guy. I feel like this really captures their dynamic as Galbadian outsiders and people working out their attractions to others who are not present in that frank conversation. Rinoa would so call him out on his bluff regarding them dating. Honestly, that's how it usually is - the people you'd have most in common with and be great on paper aren't the ones that stoke your interest. It's a really nice moment of teenagers being teenagers and I like how the atmosphere in FH was really painted in the bar scene and the haphazard plates in contrast to Garden.

I love the moment Rinoa's doubts were proven wrong when Squall was glaring daggers at Irvine because man, that is a mood to just go and doubt everything and then a shred of proof just restores it. The fact Squall went to talk to her about Irvine afterwards was just icing on the cake since it was so adorkable and you could tell he was really out of his depth. At least Rinoa knows that he does have feelings for her, his brain just needs to catch up and process them.

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