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7/12 c1 13Given-Inside
BBxRae all the way lol!
I try to scour the fics for any constructive criticism too, because, as much as a “rave review” is thoughtful, reviews are also good for improvement :)
I only found one issue:

face. "As for Beast Boy- so what you wish."

Beast Boy jolted up. "Hey!" He whirled to face Starfire

I think you meant “do as you wish” not “so what you wish.” I was like- wait, what’s BB gonna wish for? Lol

But I love the wholesome in it and how you made BB and Raven have their tension remain throughout the story until the end. Awesome!

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