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9/4 c6 ArtsyReader
Okay, maybe I should have specified “corny”. I’m okay with corny. What I don’t like is when fics are basically just the screenplay written down with an extra character thrown in the mix that doesn’t actually add anything or change the story. You haven’t copied the gameplay down. I’m tired of fics that think they need to focus so much on Frisk or the OC falling in, dealing with an overly protective Toriel, fighting, etc that we already know. You’ve not done any of that so far and seem to have kept it fairly original.
I’m loving this so far. I hope you get some more reviews to boost your work.
8/29 c5 ArtsyReader
Oh, I’m really enjoying this so far. It’s very well written, nothing repetier, and so far nothing overly cliché or corny. I hope you continue this story!

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