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7/24 c3 18ilovecartoonsgirl
I feel like they will automatically graduate Lance, Hunk, Pidge, and even Keith because of their explementary service to the universe. Just saying, that would help with the high school diploma and job part. Also, you had a sentence that said "...but Keith says Shiro's own papers...". I think you meant saw instead of says. And why would Shiro get bills?! Didn't they declare him dead? Or did they declare him alive when he came back in the first episode? Either, I feel like that's kinda messed up. Good chapter though!
7/19 c2 ilovecartoonsgirl
Aw...A reunion hug. This was a good reunion. Good job!
7/18 c1 ilovecartoonsgirl
Oh dear...this might be a bit heartwrenching and awkward. Good start!

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