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9/6 c6 Sprshs
Loving this! Can’t wait to read more. Very nice job on capturing Killian’s character; I can imagine him thinking all of those things. I’m glad we get to see more of his time in hell before Emma finds him, since the show did not focus much on that. I love getting a Killian perspective of things!
9/5 c6 1baratta.jennifer
Killian Emma rescue you
9/5 c6 3PastOneonta
The torture! It’s beyond pain but for readers who love hurt / comfort this is great. Killian is amazing, how he even has a brain cell or a thought left in his head is beyond me. He’s still striving to get to Emma and now determined she won’t suffer Hades because of him. This was very good. I appreciate the rest of the story, the complete scenes from the episode that we only get through fanfic. We learned what Killian was thinking when Hades gave him the tool to carve names on tombstones, we learn about the river of lost souls, and we see a moment of Killian’s hope when he learns he helped one soul escape. Where is that hope now? Is Hades about to string him up? Thanks for the chapter.
9/2 c5 PastOneonta
Wow! Tough to read the torture and the thought of broken bones breaking again or 50 lashes over the same area or nothing but pain. And anger, and Killian is an expert at using anger to drive action. He gets up and faces a six eyed creature so he can get a message to Emma. He is amazing.

This was very good. I appreciated the behind the scenes writing of his experiences in Hades’ dungeon. I liked Killian POV of hearing Emma and seeing her briefly in the cemetery. He doesn’t have all the details but it’s enough. She will find him. I liked his thought of ‘hoping for hope’. We understand. He’s been beaten to the end of hope.

Thanks for the chapter.
9/1 c5 1baratta.jennifer
Oh Killian
9/1 c4 3PastOneonta
Oh my goodness! Killian is managing, somehow, he’s still himself, he’s still fighting Hades. There is still hope. But the torture! Hades is determined to break him and I’m worried!
8/30 c4 1baratta.jennifer
Killian
8/28 c3 3PastOneonta
The torture! Poor Killian, the devastation of thinking he had defeated the guards and found an escape only to find it was just a trick! Hades is extremely vindictive! He wants to crush Killian’s spirit and his hope. I like that aspect, it sort of explains why Hades - Lord Hades I should say - is as threatening as he is. What else has he got planned? Thanks for the chapter.
8/28 c2 PastOneonta
Killian’s suffering makes for a great story. (That doesn’t sound right, I hope you know what I mean). He’s trying to manage his response to pain and how he feels but he can’t possibly anticipate everything Hades has planned. Such as burning hot metal bars for a cell. I am sad to see his guilt and how it overwhelms. He needs to be mentally strong. Which is easy for me to say. I can’t imagine how he will hold up.
8/26 c3 3Kilgharrah1
another great chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat...!
8/26 c1 James Birdsong
Excellent story so far
8/23 c2 Kilgharrah1
This is so, so good! I'm so sad that there are only two chapters so far! (I'm not going to rush you though, don't worry! ;) )The characters are written perfectly - I can hear the actors speaking. Very well written. I'm very excited to follow this story!
8/17 c2 cschallert
Great start. Will there be a rescue?
7/28 c1 3PastOneonta
Great beginning! And yes, there is a lot of hurt / comfort storyline available in the Underworld now that Killian is there. Hades clearly has a grudge. Is it Killian’s long life? We will have to see. Thanks for a new chapter story.

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