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7/30 c7 10HonestBee
Aw no, I was hoping there would be a better outcome to the missing kid. Poor kid, poor Eliot! And now it's apparently more than one? Definitely retribution needs to be had!

I'm also wondering if there might be any legal trouble down the line - since according to TV shows, the finder of the body is always a suspect :D

On another note, I LOVE Mt. St. Helens! Have been there several times, and can't get over the beauty!
7/30 c7 599Ghostwriter
Ooh boy. No wonder Elliot's in a mood (to put things politely). Do I sense a visit to the local were community in the future? Well done. Keep it up.
7/23 c6 10HonestBee
Growly and stompy, love it!

Ooh, another thread in the tale now - missing kid. You know Eliot would never ignore that! I'm really beginning to wonder what's going on with these new wolves. The flashbacks are just enough to be intriguing without giving away too much at once!
7/18 c5 HonestBee
'"Would you just get your fuzzy butt up here already." Parker threw a couple of popcorn pieces at Eliot's nose.'

Only Parker could get away with that! I loved Hardison's musings at the end when he thought Eliot was asleep, I wonder how these changes are really going to affect him in the future.

Can't wait to find out more!
7/15 c5 599Ghostwriter
Awesome job. Ofc Parker would pick the Mr. Rogers movie. What better way for her to confirm to Elliot that she considers him family without actually SAYINNG it? She's not the greatest at voicing emotions so she would do something like this. Well done.
7/12 c4 10HonestBee
Ah HA! I was wondering about Hardison since Eliot didn't seem all that concerned that Parker might have a head injury that damaged her vision. This makes sense! So Hardison is gaining some of the wolfy physical powers while Parker has gained some of the emotional/mental powers right? Seems like a nice balance.

Now, why am I afraid that Eliot won't make it back in time for movie night?
7/8 c4 599Ghostwriter
Ooh Hardison gets wolfy powers. YAY! I love it. I also love the hospital visit. Well done.
7/3 c3 meliss9900
More interesting stuff. Hmmm. I’m wondering if Hardison isn’t starting to manifest some wolf like traits.

More Dr Terry!
7/3 c3 10HonestBee
Well, as long as it's for a good reason, you're forgiven. For Eliot though, not for Parker. You're gonna have to have a reeeeaaaaly good reason for hurting her. Don't explain it to me, you have to answer to Eliot and Hardison for that one!

I love seeing the dynamics between them all, great job!
7/2 c3 599Ghostwriter
Aww, poor Elliot and Parker. Well done. Keep it up.
6/26 c2 10HonestBee
Aw, of course Parker is restless because Eliot is! I love that she is so sensitive, her character has really grown, but she's definitely still Parker.

I'm not sure what to make of Perrine any more than Eliot is, but what a completely Eliot-like response to her advances, the cad! I'm hoping she's just an innocent party, but am still reserving judgment.
6/25 c2 meliss9900
Henry Bugg/Henri Boguet? Interesting.

I love the detail of the text messages chronicling Parker’s ascent into sugar highdom. And of course she’d pick up on something thru the pack bonds.

Can’t wait until the next chapter.
6/25 c2 599Ghostwriter
Elliot, don't argue with your sister. Yes, I equated Parker with a sibling. I love this. I wonder what's going on and I can't wait to see what you come up with.
6/20 c1 10HonestBee
New story! I must say this does not start out quite as creepy as the last one, but I'm still unsettled. The freaky side of life has not been terribly kind to Eliot and Co lately.

Still, since Eliot seemed to enjoy this wine, I hope the threat isn't from this wolf and they might be able to strike up a business deal between the winery and pub.

But then I remember your historical context at the beginning, and I get unsettled again.
6/19 c1 meliss9900
Interesting. I’m wondering if the hunters are humans hunting werewolves.
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