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7/26 c1 9Talia
Nice fun read! Well written, and I like the plausible story and reactions - though honestly, in the film Ariel is kind of a bimbo and usually leaves things like suspicion and rational thinking over to Sebastien and Flounder. If this had happened in the film, they'd be the ones who noticed all the clues and would just march her in to deal with it.
7/2 c1 136rebecca-in-blue
I really love your AU take on things here. Ariel was always such a spirited Disney princess that I think figuring out something was wrong and springing into action makes a lot more sense for her! This story was such a great read, although the semi-confrontation between her and "Vanessa" at the end makes it feel like there should be more to it. Either way, wonderful work - I'll be sharing this at my forum. :)
6/22 c1 18IrrevocableRomantic
Will there be a second part?
I look forward to it
6/19 c1 Barbie Genevieve
Oh sorry, I meant 15, not 12 years old.
6/19 c1 Barbie Genevieve
Dear Serenity Sapphires,

I have been trying to login to ffnet with a fake account, but it never works. So I don't think we can chat. If your wondering why I tried to login with a fake account was because you seeeeeee... I am a 12 year old Indian and my parents are a little strict, so I am not allowed to use phones.

The only reason I have a tablet is for online classes. And they don't want me to bother so much about Barbie movies. But I absolutely love them and fanfics on them.

So there you go, this is the truth. I didn't mean to disappoint you.

Barbie Genevieve.
6/17 c1 11marati2011
Great story
6/16 c1 Guest
Love this story! Will you be able to continue it? Please continue it! Can't wait for what happens next!
6/16 c1 Guest
WOW!

I really like this. ;)

Great job. :)
6/16 c1 8Serenity Sapphires
Hi Barbie Genevieve, thank you for leaving such amazing reviews on all of my stories, they inspire me to keep writing. As for the island princess fic, I am rewriting it and will re-publish it in a few days. I wasn't happy on where I originally ended the story so I'll give it a new ending. I already have most of it written, just in the final steps.

I hope you get a fanfiction account, so it will be easier to reply to all of your reviews! Have a good day!
6/16 c1 Barbie Genevieve
Sweet! And why did you delete your Island Princess story? I was really into it

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