7/20 c4 Karenskatz
You're ending on a cliff hanger; I REALY hope you are going to write more soon?
You're ending on a cliff hanger; I REALY hope you are going to write more soon?
7/8 c4 Guest
Excellent so far. I hope this story will be continued. ?
Excellent so far. I hope this story will be continued. ?
7/5 c3 Lestat74
Good job so far! I enjoyed these three chapters. I like your writing style, it transported me to the action and Mac’s pain. I can’t wait for the development of this story!
Good job so far! I enjoyed these three chapters. I like your writing style, it transported me to the action and Mac’s pain. I can’t wait for the development of this story!
7/4 c4 Guest
Great buildup for what lies ahead. Thanks for the update!
Great buildup for what lies ahead. Thanks for the update!
6/26 c3 Guest
Thanks for the update!
Thanks for the update!
6/21 c2 gms1976
Great story! Love your detailed style of writing - creates an amazing visual in my mind. I can tell you have put a good deal of thought behind your words. You have great talent and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Great story! Love your detailed style of writing - creates an amazing visual in my mind. I can tell you have put a good deal of thought behind your words. You have great talent and I can't wait for the next chapter!
6/20 c2 Guest
Thank you for updating so quickly. Great chapter!
Thank you for updating so quickly. Great chapter!