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12h c41 4danifan3000
interesting, Lou let the babies join in here. when I watched the episode, every time Lou put Tommy and Chuckie back in the crib, I was screaming "good lord man, just shut the door!" the whole family knows Tommy's able to get out of crib, yet Lou just leaves the door wide open every time he leaves the room.
14h c41 29Boris Yeltsin
Very nice take on that ep.
8/3 c40 4danifan3000
one thing I never could understand about shows with family reunions in the 90's and before, is why it is that everyone at the reunion always seem to have names that rhyme with the main characters, weirdly enough even the portions of them that aren't even biologically related.
8/3 c40 29Boris Yeltsin
Not bad.
8/2 c39 3RJWritingInk
So is this going to last for the entire series because that is a lot of episodes? Also, are there any chances that this will negatively affect the baby’s mental growth?
8/2 c39 Iris Gale
We're starting to get into psychological horror territory. This is remarkable. I am very impressed.
8/2 c39 220celrock
Interesting take on the episode. In this version, the ATM didn't destroy Didi's card like it did in the original episode, prompting her to have to go inside the bank. Also, interesting dream for Tommy to have on the way to the bank, continuing his thought process from the previous chapter, of thinking his parents want to turn him back into a baby baby, never to have fun ever again.

As always, keep up the great writing!
8/2 c39 4danifan3000
A couple things that kind of bugged me a little, are the babies hard of hearing? I mean Didi says ATM, tommy thinks she said M&M's, they say their going to the Grand Canyon, he thinks they said gram canyon even after Angelica corrects him and so on.

I also wonder if the bank was legit with all the random questions on the form Didi was filling out. I have family that works at a bank and the forms aren't that random.
8/2 c39 29Boris Yeltsin
Well done.
8/1 c38 6Cherry Jolicoeur
tommy's so annoying, i really like how chuckie's increasingly done with putting up with him
8/1 c38 4danifan3000
as many times as Chuckie screamed in the actual episode, it amazes me that none of the adults heard him.
8/1 c38 29Boris Yeltsin
Well done, once again.
7/31 c37 220celrock
I sort of saw this coming. You must admit, that fence they had for a playpen didn't do much to keep the babies inside of it. Even if Tommy didn't have his screwdriver like what was the case in a couple of episodes, all they had to do was stack on top of one another and the baby on top could easily climb out of that thing. And I do remember in the original episode, Garage Sale, the parents didn't even realize they had sold everything including stuff they never wanted to sell, until they came back inside after the garage sale and found the house, practically empty. At least in this version, they realized it early, not only, saving items they didn't wish to sell, but also protecting the kids and getting them a safer playpen, much to Tommy's dismay.;

As always, keep up the great writing!
7/31 c37 17Apex85
Hahaha! Suck it Tommy.
7/31 c37 4danifan3000
Another episode where one of the babies nearly die on one of their adventures due to the fact that Chuckie can't seem to say NO! To Tommy. Chuckie was flung out the door and half way across the yard. It honestly amazes me Chuckie didn't draw the line here rather than the episode where Tommy's constant need for adventure broke Chuckie's glasses.
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