8/12 c6 Guest
Very good chapter nice layering, great interactions between the characters especially Adam and Teela
Very good chapter nice layering, great interactions between the characters especially Adam and Teela
8/12 c6 2Heart of the Demons
This chapter is pure magic in and of itself. Again, you nail down the characters' personalities. I especially enjoy the way you write the Adam/Teela dynamic, because those two have been through so much over the years. You, sir, are a true master of storytelling.
This chapter is pure magic in and of itself. Again, you nail down the characters' personalities. I especially enjoy the way you write the Adam/Teela dynamic, because those two have been through so much over the years. You, sir, are a true master of storytelling.
8/12 c6 Disney Boy
Well now this story is interesting. I wonder what will happen next. If it makes you feel better what you saw so far is Part 1 and Part 2 will come someday soon. A
Also according to the creator in response to complaints, Adam is just wounded and not killed. So maybe Part 2 might be better. Keep your fingers crossed for it and wait and see what happens next.
Well now this story is interesting. I wonder what will happen next. If it makes you feel better what you saw so far is Part 1 and Part 2 will come someday soon. A
Also according to the creator in response to complaints, Adam is just wounded and not killed. So maybe Part 2 might be better. Keep your fingers crossed for it and wait and see what happens next.
8/11 c5 5vansho-lakon
Once again you did it better.
I hope we get a glimpse into Adam's journey up until now in the next chapter.
Once again you did it better.
I hope we get a glimpse into Adam's journey up until now in the next chapter.
8/11 c5 2Heart of the Demons
Tri-Klops really does value technology more than magic, and I believe you showcased that perfectly in this next chapter. Your take on "MOTU: Revelation" just gets more and more intriguing every time you update it.
Tri-Klops really does value technology more than magic, and I believe you showcased that perfectly in this next chapter. Your take on "MOTU: Revelation" just gets more and more intriguing every time you update it.
8/9 c4 Heart of the Demons
Eternia needs her heroes now more than ever. It breaks my heart to visualize the planet dying in the post-Skeletor era in this chapter. It shows that you're quite capable of doing quality storytelling.
Eternia needs her heroes now more than ever. It breaks my heart to visualize the planet dying in the post-Skeletor era in this chapter. It shows that you're quite capable of doing quality storytelling.
8/7 c3 2Heart of the Demons
Everyone, especially Teela and Adam, is completely spot on with their personalities and motivations here. I really like that in your version of "MOTU: Revelation," Teela is fully made aware of Adam's secret and is understanding about it. It gets me so pumped to wanna know where this rewrite will go next.
Everyone, especially Teela and Adam, is completely spot on with their personalities and motivations here. I really like that in your version of "MOTU: Revelation," Teela is fully made aware of Adam's secret and is understanding about it. It gets me so pumped to wanna know where this rewrite will go next.
8/7 c3 Bingo
Thank you for your Story
So much better than Netflix
I like Teela since I was a kid. And I always thought there is much more potential in her. You did it right
Thank you
Thank you for your Story
So much better than Netflix
I like Teela since I was a kid. And I always thought there is much more potential in her. You did it right
Thank you
8/7 c3 Guest
Very good
Very good
8/6 c3 5vansho-lakon
Things are getting good I want to see where it goes keep up the great work.
Also thank you for not making Teela an out-of-character insufferable jerkface.
Things are getting good I want to see where it goes keep up the great work.
Also thank you for not making Teela an out-of-character insufferable jerkface.
8/6 c2 503Zarius
Excellent chapter, Teela's emotional reaction and Adam still being 'present' and not pulled away from her should lend to an interesting couple of chapters.
Excellent chapter, Teela's emotional reaction and Adam still being 'present' and not pulled away from her should lend to an interesting couple of chapters.
8/6 c2 2Heart of the Demons
So sad. He-Man/Adam has the heart of a warrior, and for him to give up his life like he did in this chapter is a literal heartbreaker. You, my friend, are certainly finding your footing with this new rewrite. I hope you continue it.
So sad. He-Man/Adam has the heart of a warrior, and for him to give up his life like he did in this chapter is a literal heartbreaker. You, my friend, are certainly finding your footing with this new rewrite. I hope you continue it.