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8/12 c6 Guest
Very good chapter nice layering, great interactions between the characters especially Adam and Teela
8/12 c6 2Heart of the Demons
This chapter is pure magic in and of itself. Again, you nail down the characters' personalities. I especially enjoy the way you write the Adam/Teela dynamic, because those two have been through so much over the years. You, sir, are a true master of storytelling.
8/12 c6 Disney Boy
Well now this story is interesting. I wonder what will happen next. If it makes you feel better what you saw so far is Part 1 and Part 2 will come someday soon. A
Also according to the creator in response to complaints, Adam is just wounded and not killed. So maybe Part 2 might be better. Keep your fingers crossed for it and wait and see what happens next.
8/11 c5 5vansho-lakon
Once again you did it better.
I hope we get a glimpse into Adam's journey up until now in the next chapter.
8/11 c5 2Heart of the Demons
Tri-Klops really does value technology more than magic, and I believe you showcased that perfectly in this next chapter. Your take on "MOTU: Revelation" just gets more and more intriguing every time you update it.
8/9 c4 Heart of the Demons
Eternia needs her heroes now more than ever. It breaks my heart to visualize the planet dying in the post-Skeletor era in this chapter. It shows that you're quite capable of doing quality storytelling.
8/9 c4 5vansho-lakon
Interesting way of introducing the motherboard cult.
8/7 c3 2Heart of the Demons
Everyone, especially Teela and Adam, is completely spot on with their personalities and motivations here. I really like that in your version of "MOTU: Revelation," Teela is fully made aware of Adam's secret and is understanding about it. It gets me so pumped to wanna know where this rewrite will go next.
8/7 c3 Bingo
Thank you for your Story
So much better than Netflix
I like Teela since I was a kid. And I always thought there is much more potential in her. You did it right
Thank you
8/7 c3 Guest
Very good
8/6 c3 5vansho-lakon
Things are getting good I want to see where it goes keep up the great work.
Also thank you for not making Teela an out-of-character insufferable jerkface.
8/6 c2 503Zarius
Excellent chapter, Teela's emotional reaction and Adam still being 'present' and not pulled away from her should lend to an interesting couple of chapters.
8/6 c2 2Heart of the Demons
So sad. He-Man/Adam has the heart of a warrior, and for him to give up his life like he did in this chapter is a literal heartbreaker. You, my friend, are certainly finding your footing with this new rewrite. I hope you continue it.
8/5 c2 4Donalbain
GREAT chapter. I would have enjoyed seeing this as an episode. Thanks for posting!
8/5 c2 5vansho-lakon
This was so much better I wish the Netflix show was like this.
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