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8/17 c3 2holoswirls
Wow that was a surprise for sure! Dang that's one heck of an epilogue. You really know how to paint a picture with words. It definitely is a milestone! I liked how descriptive the timeskip was, it was to the point but not jarring. From the ring to the vista around them, your writing sets a scene that is clear as day. Awesome work.
8/9 c2 holoswirls
Reiterating my review for chapter 1, I really liked the nature of Emily and Sam's relationship. It's refreshing to see her enjoying herself and feeling safe. It was nice to see other people in Emily’s life approving of Sam. Chapter 2 was really wholesome and heartwarming. You write them so well, and I'd love to see more of Emily and Sam in this story or another. It felt natural how things progressed. Your original stories are just as amazing as the ones that follow a movie storyline, and I'd definitely love to read more of the former. Awesome chapters as always!

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