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8/3 c1 25Juxapose4ever
I really wish that this story was a full multi chapter fanfic. I am deeply interested in what happen both before and after this story. It's very rare to see a Fanfic about Eve, and even rarer that I can see a story based on Harvest Moon: SNES (or is this Magical Melody?) Anyways I love it, keep up the good work!
8/2 c1 90SaoirseParisa
Yay, another new story from you! Now this was a great one! I admit I never pursued Eve when I played the SNES game on my Wii U, and it's been a while since I touched the game, but I really like what you did with her here. Eve and her grandfather have very different ways of living life, and even though they're family, they both clash because of this, and it's clear that even though Eve has good intentions, her actions did drive a wedge between them, and she at least knows she shouldn't try to force him to change his ways. Of course, her grandfather isn't much better, hardly taking time to be there for her when she needed him. So in a way, they're both at fault for what happened, but the incident did help them grow a little closer in the end. They're both flawed but good people when it matters most. I really like this take on Eve. It makes her feel more nuanced than the little bits the SNES game gave us. Great job on this one!

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