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9/6 c1 Guest
I really like the idea behind this story & how close the sisters are right now. While I don’t think her parents would lock her up just for speaking to a muggle born at school lol I do like the conflict you’ve got going of trying to seem strong but accidentally harming her sisters along the way. Can’t wait to read more!
8/28 c1 Guest
I'm afraid that the premise as stated in the introduction on the archive entry is a bit of fluffy untruth. Humans come into the world as the most selfish and greedy individuals you can imagine. It's rather understandable as they are some of the most helpless animals on the planet when they are infants. The sad truth is that humans have to learn to trust and love. It is really helpful if they grow up with well adjusted and loving parents. The book "Lord of the Flies" is not such a fairy tail as many would hope. Don't get me wrong. Infants are highly intelligent and easily influenced. They are easily molded. Leaving them to their own devices with only food and water - no training and no positive or negative influences - is a horrible way to get good adult humans out of the equation.
8/14 c1 Guest
nicely done
8/14 c3 James Birdsong
Good chapter
8/7 c2 James Birdsong
Nice two chapters

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