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8/9 c1 16SilentStarlightSky
I didn't even think of the sorceress aspect. Yes, that would be a big problem.

And Caraway would react that way. Maybe he'd be overprotective about Rinoa, but he'd think he's strong enough for anything. Five miles a day. That was a nice touch, haha. But it was also sad. (Bad things only can happen to weak people, Rinoa)

What a great idea to make up your own challenge!

Now I'm wondering who would be the biggest germaphobe out of the characters? Zell? Squall's pretty cautious too. I can imagine Selphie snapping a Shell on herself whenever anybody sneezes, even though it probably wouldn't help. (It's worth a try!)
8/9 c1 10Queen000
Wow, this was an incredible read! Definitely realistic to the world we have been in for the last year and a half.

I don't want to go into details because I know I'll end up spoiling something (I'm fairly sure there are people who read the comments before reading a story), but I just want to say that this chapter is a fantastic start and I look forward to reading more very much :).

ciao *waves*
Queen000
8/8 c1 17colobonema
So great to see your fic! I never wavered in my faith it was coming ;)

I really liked the way you set up the scene with the claustrophobia of forced isolation, the sudden separations based on dumb luck and the timing of lockdown, the not knowing how long it will last. Hanging in limbo. Poor Squall, poor Rinoa.

The gulf between Esthar’s deadly situation and Caraway’s reality-denying bravado (hmmm, can’t think why this sounds familiar…) is depressingly realistic. Presumably that will be a factor in the drama to come.

Of course Rinoa wants to help. Yeah, I definitely get the feeling she’s going to do it anyway. (Rinoa in a nutshell) The conflict between them is really believable here. All the tensions surrounding her status as a Sorceress too. I liked the little touch about Squall being unsettled when faced with a blank wall. Now you know how everyone else feels around you, my dude.

The part about keeping her in the male dorms to prevent a Succession taking place is so clever.

(OMG Kiros and Ward better be okay, though.)

And hey - it’s your challenge, post whenever the heck you like! :D

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