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8/17 c1 21The Grey Coincidence
That was interesting... What did I just read?
I kid, I kid :P
An interesting story you've got here! Or well the beginning of one anyway. You have a mystery hook- the abbot's office (whatever is he hiding? What could it- *gaaaaasp* Nooooo! It's a hedgehog-eating badger isn't it! Your fun fact was FORESHADOWING!
We meet Tim, he seems nice. Typical Redwall healer. Leaves the abbey to help out an otter with three (3!) fishing hooks in his tail (he shouldn't have gone swimming where the other otters were fishing). Only for Randorat to shoot the otter and threaten them with immediate execution. Fun!
A good start, welcome to the archive, hope you write more :)

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