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for Heart To Heart Madagascar Marty X OC Alexis

7/23 c1 5Madagascarbethesdafan
I read your fanfic and it was good, has good potential for a fantasy action story and you character Alexis, she's a good character, sad that her parents died, otherwise a good read. Now to be honest and this is not a flame, but just a pointer, it did seem a little rushed with the multiple time skips. I know it was supposed to be a romance fic between Marty and Alexis, but a lot of description and story was left out. i know it seems i might be flaming, but I'm not and I'm sorry if I am, but I think your fanfic has much potential.

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