7/19 c3 8KenosDC1
Not too bad of a chapter, bit of a fun fact, I like how you called this chapter “Love” and we got to see Liebe, who’s name along with Asta’s literally means love.
Also, I’m intrigued by the thought Yami presented about fighting someone else with Anti-Magic. Could it be a bit of foreshadowing?
Not too bad of a chapter, bit of a fun fact, I like how you called this chapter “Love” and we got to see Liebe, who’s name along with Asta’s literally means love.
Also, I’m intrigued by the thought Yami presented about fighting someone else with Anti-Magic. Could it be a bit of foreshadowing?
7/17 c2 KenosDC1
Hm, this one was short too, but it was necessary in setting up the premise for the story, so no worries.
I actually want to know who’s the vice-captain of the Golden Dawn now that Yuno is captain, will it be Langris? Or probably Klaus or Mimosa?
Hm, this one was short too, but it was necessary in setting up the premise for the story, so no worries.
I actually want to know who’s the vice-captain of the Golden Dawn now that Yuno is captain, will it be Langris? Or probably Klaus or Mimosa?
7/17 c1 KenosDC1
Not a bad beginning, I wonder what route this story will take, if you ever think this story could go for a good amount of time and you’re not sure how to do that, don’t hesitate to PM me, you could also just PM me if you need any help, we authors need to be there for each other, especially those beginning their work on this site.
Not a bad beginning, I wonder what route this story will take, if you ever think this story could go for a good amount of time and you’re not sure how to do that, don’t hesitate to PM me, you could also just PM me if you need any help, we authors need to be there for each other, especially those beginning their work on this site.