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8/1 c1 1Supermel1
yay
8/1 c1 2Kailah of Redwall
Don't fret, Supermel! :) This is a loong story! Its going to cover all of Mattimeo's growth until he marries Tess. I am glad you like it :)
8/1 c1 1Supermel1
BEAUTIFUL! thank you for waiting to post and for writing it. I loved it. (now I need a part 2. from like Matthias's point of view though as he went after Cynthia and brought her back to camp and the duties he does around the camp and getting Mattimeo from his group of friends like he said he would. as well as the journey back. but you do not have to if you do not want to. )
7/31 c1 6One-Eye the Wildcat
amogus
7/29 c1 Patricia Bailey
A very well written, descriptive account of a Warrior Father and Son ‘s reunion, after a great battle! Full of descriptive feelings, that continues with others in their community who were also part of the battle! Much emotion expressed , of warmth, deep friendship
7/29 c1 Abrahem
I remember when you read this to us on discord, how delightful it was. Now, finally, it’s for all the public to read! Very proud of you. Shame I didn’t read the original Saorise ceiren when it was published, but ah well, we’ll get to it, unless it’s the same plot point as this.

Anyway, you’ve expanded Matemeo in a great way, Brian would be proud. I especially love the attention to detail you have to Cynthia, and I hope you continue to expand on her. Maybe matemeo’s family could take her in? Cornflower essentially acted like a mother to her brother Rollo, and it could show Matti’s growth, from how he was annoyed by her to becoming a big brother.
Matemeo’s trauma was also handled very well, the way reality has crushed his dreams and perceptions, it captures very well, if not better, what Brian captured, the tragedy of war. And the fact that no matter how just your cause, the stoutest of hearts crack, and lives are wasted too quickly.

The little details, the accents and such, are also well done. The dialogue is very natural and chatty, very much Jacques-esque.

I can’t wait for this story to continue, and what you’ll come up with next. I’ll be sure to tune in same redwall time, same redwall place.
Keep up the good work, have a wonderful day.

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