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8/2 c1 Bittersteel626
INTERESTED
8/2 c1 EvilReaderMaximum
It's a good start, although you need to spell/grammar check
also the whole stealing clothes thing is kinda cringe tbh
7/31 c1 Guest
Good story
8/2 c1 luther10120111
I am liking the chapter but the underwear things is pretty vile. So that's my main draw back .I'll wait and see what happens .
7/31 c1 EvilIsSexy
So, first, I wanna say I appreciate someone actually doing an SI for worm and it not being horrible. I like the premise so far, even if we haven't seen much.

The grammar could use some work, a couple uses of he and she in the wrong place, along with swapping we and they and a couple spelling errors. Not bad, honestly. Still very legible compared to some of the trash thrown on this website.

The biggest gripe I have so fsr, is that I'm pretty sure Taylor didn't use yarn for her suit. I think she had it made and weaved from spider silk, which gave it a higher degree of resistance and strength than most independent cape outfits.
8/1 c1 Djberneman
Why the hell doesn’t he have plans to screw Coil over and not do the Ruby Casino job and get on Lungs bad side? Him and Taylor both know that the other is a parahuman, so why not give her some advice about the true failings of the PRT and how she should join up with Parian to make a lot of money so that she could have enough funds to afford more exotic insects?
8/1 c1 16zigmas
Cool, but a few questions:

Who's Awkward?
Such a funny cape name, lol.

Can Lung get cancer?
Can Taytay control it with her power, lol?

This one's serious:
Is Panpan smoking canonically?
That's way weird, given how she KNOWS the results and CAN'T self-heal.

The story is cool, though.
I wanna MORRRE!
7/31 c1 Blaze1992
Wait he has memories of the world and a power of sorts, and he didn't kill those 3 Winslow idiots?
7/30 c1 Aadarm
Get and use Grammarly.
7/30 c1 5Time Parad0x
There is POV change in the middle of the paragraph at the end when Taylor is fetched from school -

Taylor stitching her costume - has me confused wasn't it completely weaved by spiders?

It is an interesting premise -

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