1h c2 20Piscean6724
This is going to be so good. I’m thrilled for Melissa but worried for Matt. And the foreshadowing with the hankypanky in the lab was brilliant. Can’t wait for more!
This is going to be so good. I’m thrilled for Melissa but worried for Matt. And the foreshadowing with the hankypanky in the lab was brilliant. Can’t wait for more!
7h c2 119katbybee
I really like this story so far. I am so honored that you are carrying on the Carter legacy through Matt. He's an awesome young man and you've created in him a character his family is very proud of. It goes without saying that when someone messes with a Carter, they have no clue what kind of a hornet's nest they're kicking over. Looking forward to see where your muse takes you!
I really like this story so far. I am so honored that you are carrying on the Carter legacy through Matt. He's an awesome young man and you've created in him a character his family is very proud of. It goes without saying that when someone messes with a Carter, they have no clue what kind of a hornet's nest they're kicking over. Looking forward to see where your muse takes you!
8h c2 mops1980
Good to see that Matt is on recovery. But I'm afraid there will come more and the tox screen wasn't that clear. My suspicion is, that Cherry has something to do with it. But maybe I'm reading to much thrillers and crime stories. ;)
Good to see that Matt is on recovery. But I'm afraid there will come more and the tox screen wasn't that clear. My suspicion is, that Cherry has something to do with it. But maybe I'm reading to much thrillers and crime stories. ;)
8/3 c2 Rosemoor
Apparently Matt still doesn't know where Melissa is. It looks like Matt's tox screen may not have been clean. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Apparently Matt still doesn't know where Melissa is. It looks like Matt's tox screen may not have been clean. Looking forward to the next chapter.
7/30 c1 mops1980
Nice beginning. And the first story where I didn't need the glossar because German is my native language. :D
Looking forward to read more of this.
Nice beginning. And the first story where I didn't need the glossar because German is my native language. :D
Looking forward to read more of this.