9/8 c1 BabyNake
I like it! The idea is original and intriguing; it makes me want to know more. I also love the balance between crime and punishment, or becoming the very thing Erik sought to hide from: justice. Wonderful chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
I like it! The idea is original and intriguing; it makes me want to know more. I also love the balance between crime and punishment, or becoming the very thing Erik sought to hide from: justice. Wonderful chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
9/8 c1 9Pianomanblaine
Oooh, I'm intrigued! At first sight, this seems like something quite a bit darker than what I would usually read, but I'm curious to know more about Erik's backstory and to see where this is going. Love your writing style!
Oooh, I'm intrigued! At first sight, this seems like something quite a bit darker than what I would usually read, but I'm curious to know more about Erik's backstory and to see where this is going. Love your writing style!
9/8 c1 Mominator124
Wow! What a wonderful descriptive style of writing you have. Well written and leaving the reader wanting more: more background on Erik's condition, how he was chosen, *why* he was chosen, especially since his former life seems more in common with the murderer he just dispatched than someone redeemable.
I can't wait to see how he comes to encounter Christine. ;)
Barb
Wow! What a wonderful descriptive style of writing you have. Well written and leaving the reader wanting more: more background on Erik's condition, how he was chosen, *why* he was chosen, especially since his former life seems more in common with the murderer he just dispatched than someone redeemable.
I can't wait to see how he comes to encounter Christine. ;)
Barb
9/8 c1 Dkk5
Woah! I am so happy to read a new story from you. The body locations reminded me if the movie Sicario, with Emily Blunt. I couldn’t stomach it and never finished it, lol. But I have faith that this is just a part of his backstory. I really enjoy your writing style, you get to the point if a lit if information without overly explaining unnecessary details. Ok, more updates, please!
Woah! I am so happy to read a new story from you. The body locations reminded me if the movie Sicario, with Emily Blunt. I couldn’t stomach it and never finished it, lol. But I have faith that this is just a part of his backstory. I really enjoy your writing style, you get to the point if a lit if information without overly explaining unnecessary details. Ok, more updates, please!