10/11 c1 HPforever-after
I can’t believe it! I just finished this episode and wished to find a story about them after his worry in his voice when he called her. Thank you! Great job too!
I can’t believe it! I just finished this episode and wished to find a story about them after his worry in his voice when he called her. Thank you! Great job too!
9/9 c1 Guest
I liked the story very much .. I love when they flirt without knowing it
I liked the story very much .. I love when they flirt without knowing it
9/8 c1 Guest
This was awesome. Made me smile
This was awesome. Made me smile
9/7 c1 Guest
Wow great story
Wow great story
9/7 c1 Guest
I'm glad you decided to revisit this universe despite the way it ended. Sharon and Andy are more physically demonstrative than I think they'd be at this point, especially in front of other members of LAPD, but I'm interested in where you take this and look forward to the companion piece. I like your look inside Andy's head, and the interaction between him and Provenza is great (I love Andy ignoring Provenza as usual, and then thinking hey, at least there's one thing normal about this crime scene). One nitpick: Having fired her gun, Sharon wouldn't be able to head back to PAB right away, she'd have to remain on scene in that 3rd floor apartment until she was interviewed by FID.
I'm glad you decided to revisit this universe despite the way it ended. Sharon and Andy are more physically demonstrative than I think they'd be at this point, especially in front of other members of LAPD, but I'm interested in where you take this and look forward to the companion piece. I like your look inside Andy's head, and the interaction between him and Provenza is great (I love Andy ignoring Provenza as usual, and then thinking hey, at least there's one thing normal about this crime scene). One nitpick: Having fired her gun, Sharon wouldn't be able to head back to PAB right away, she'd have to remain on scene in that 3rd floor apartment until she was interviewed by FID.