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for The Moment I Saw You, I Knew You Were a Keeper

10/14 c5 Guest
Great chapter as always.
Have fun in Rome! Eat some Fonzeis (is that how you spell it?) for me!
10/13 c5 JustRandom
Feelings. Yes. Very much feelings ;0;
Holy shiz these two are ADORABLE. WHY. HOW. WHEN?
I slowly melted throughout this entire chapter and now my existence has been reduced to slime. Thank you for helping me achieve my true form x)

OMGS WHERE DO I EVEN START?

I hope they catch those stupid bullies. Bianca didn't deserve that. Everyone should have the chance to grow up and reach their dreams ;-;
And poor Nicooo no wonder he's practicing so hard t-t
My favorite scene was definitely the part where Nico comes to ask him to watch him train. WHY IS BLUSHING NICO SO ADOOORABLEEEEE
My heart BROKE when he started crying I-
I wanna cover him in blankets and keep him safe ;-; but I guess Will is already doing that so~

And you short describing really makes everything so much easier to imagine. I saw every single detail in my mind like I was watching it happen.

But holy sheiz the feeeelllls

Will you precious gem of COURSE you like him you idiot-
I absolutely love the ending.
Incredibly brilliant and poetic vocabulary indeed : 3
10/13 c1 SentinalSlice
Shouldn’t this be in the crossover section?
10/13 c5 4Katie Hopps
You're going to ROME? Oh my gods, I've always wanted to go there! Ever since I read HOO, I've been dying to go there but my parents had other work and then this pandemic started and they wouldn't let me go, they wouldn't even let me plan the trip! It's annoying, really. Uh, sorry about the ranting.
Great chapter as usual! And yay! Will and Nico are friends! Also, you're a great writer, 'cause you're good at giving me mini-heart attacks. When you said "everything changed again", I was really scared they would quit being friends... So thankful they didn't. Oooh and he ~finally~ realised! Yay!
But no update till the Saturday after next... that's... *sighs* I suppose we readers should compromise for the early update. *sniffles* I will be waiting eagerly for the next update.
10/11 c1 4Adri genieler
First chapter and I already love it, will keep reading and waiting for updates, i really like this idea!
10/10 c4 1Skyler1919
This story is great, and I really wish there will be a bit more solangelo...
10/9 c4 4Katie Hopps
Awwww, Will has a crush! Magnus has a crush! Hearth and Blitz have a crush! And I LOVED this chapter! And next update on WEDNESDAY?! That's the best news ever! Yayy!
10/9 c4 JustRandom
disastrous gays sums it up pretty well ;-;
I love them already! Their interactions were so fun to read. Not to mention Nico was pretty much flirting with Will during the first half of their third conversation :P we see you, Neeks, we see you.
Also Magnus :O :'D
Hearthstone's dad is the absolute WORST.
And that cliffhanger. Whyyyyy
WHoiIi? :''0
I wonder what happened to Bianca. Not gonna lie, that's an interesting side-plot. Which I'm hoping will be revealed later : 3
Have a great dayyyy :D
10/3 c3 JustRandom
EVILLLLL
Evil indeed :''(
I'm guessing he's going to meet Will at the infirmary? Honestly that's so creative, the parallels between the situations they meet under in the book and your fanfic. I love it so much XD
The Wronski Feint. Somebody sure is glad she read The Goblet of Fire a few weeks ago :')
I got goosebumps when Annabeth was flying 0-0
And Leo is hilarious :DDDD
ALSO LAVANIA'S HEREEE
Hazel kNowS :0
I really like the way you've separated them into houses for some reason. It feels...right. Somehow :D
Can't wait for the next chapterrrr
10/2 c3 Blackdrake
I admit at first I wasn't expecting much from that story, but reading the entire thing from Wills point of view is kind of cute. I like it.
Im pretty sure hitting the keeper is against the rules though. So if that was Annabeths strategy, something I wouldn't count out, well whatever penalty they get for that must be worth it. Which it probably is, considering, that with Nico on the field they didn't get any points at all.

Anyway, Im looking forward to the next chapter and Wills first meeting with Nico.
10/2 c3 Katie Hopps
Nononononono, Oh poor poor Nico, whats gonna hApPeN tO hIm?! oh curse the waiting time, now i'll have to wait till next saturday to find out what happens. sh-snickkerdoodles!
10/2 c3 Guest
Nooooooooo! Nico! Why the cliffhanger?
9/25 c2 BobT.Unicorn
This is a great story.
Are you still going to update the what if story?
Good job
9/25 c2 Katie Hopps
I absolutely love it. Loved the Quidditch match the most. But of course, I'm a really big Quidditch fan, so that's pretty usual. Great chapter, btw, looking forward to the next one. :)
9/20 c1 10Hazel652
Love it so far!
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