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10/13 c15 Steve
Story’s picking up, and yes my heart is broken.
10/12 c14 Steve
How many times can I say I enjoyed the chapter before it gets dull?
10/11 c14 42Crow's Apprentice
Great story. True on the bullying scene. But you keep up the great work!
10/10 c13 Steve
Correct me if I’m wrong but isn’t Amelia a cheerleader, if so might want creepy luz to wind up with the goth girl for verity.
10/9 c13 11OMAC001
Not a bad chapter. Do the Gromseeds means there's a open rift into the human world, even a tiny one?
10/7 c12 Steve
Hey I always say nonfiction is the stuff they base fiction off of.
10/7 c12 10Helljumper206
Took a bit longer then I predicted but the doubt is forming between sisters. Keep it up.
10/6 c11 Steve
I always welcome a bit of worldbuilding.
10/5 c11 Helljumper206
Wow, you made Darius into a communist. Didn't see that coming.
10/3 c10 Guest
Thought for sure you’d have Luz show Amity the picture of her long lost sister. I kinda pictured it going like this.
Luz: And speaking of Lucia, she sent me an interesting picture.
Amity: Of what?
Luz: Of her and a girl that looks almost exactly like, well… like you. You know, before you dyed your hair lilac. Here, look.
Luz shows Amity her phone to show her the picture.
Amity:(looking at Lucia) You know, I see the resemblance between you and your sister. And the girl next her, you’re right. She does look like me. And those ears…
Luz: I think she’s just a cosplay girl. I mean, what are the odds of a witch in the Human Realm? As far as I’m concerned, Eda was the only one who had a working portal.
Amity: I guess you’re right.
After Luz leaves for the bathroom
Amity: That girl next to Lucia… It couldn’t be. It’s not possible, is it.
Just throwing this out before I post, I hope Luz gets her portal working. She gets home, stops whatever plan Belos has, and reunites a family. That is like three wins.
10/3 c10 Steve
Not a surprising revelation, but one that needed to be said just in case.
10/3 c10 tylerchavis97
Yes, being the other third of Ed and Em explains everything about Amelia; or rather Emily.
Wonder how she’s going to take the news when she them? And how all the Blights will react when she referred to them as elves?
10/1 c9 Steve
As an optimist I try to see the good in people so I’m going to assume creepy Luz is being sweet…

Also Tyler I agree I very much would like to see how they whole gang interacts together once they are all on the same page.
10/1 c9 tylerchavis97
I’m really looking forward to Lucia and Amelia’s reaction when Luz tells them everything.
Wonder how Amelia will take that she’s from the Boiling Isles
9/29 c8 Steve
*reads story* Vee! Time to see how Lucia interacts with what is surely going to be a angsty yet adorable comedy of errors.
*reads authors note* …oh no…
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