10/12 c14 Steve
How many times can I say I enjoyed the chapter before it gets dull?
How many times can I say I enjoyed the chapter before it gets dull?
10/11 c14 42Crow's Apprentice
Great story. True on the bullying scene. But you keep up the great work!
Great story. True on the bullying scene. But you keep up the great work!
10/10 c13 Steve
Correct me if I’m wrong but isn’t Amelia a cheerleader, if so might want creepy luz to wind up with the goth girl for verity.
Correct me if I’m wrong but isn’t Amelia a cheerleader, if so might want creepy luz to wind up with the goth girl for verity.
10/9 c13 11OMAC001
Not a bad chapter. Do the Gromseeds means there's a open rift into the human world, even a tiny one?
Not a bad chapter. Do the Gromseeds means there's a open rift into the human world, even a tiny one?
10/7 c12 Steve
Hey I always say nonfiction is the stuff they base fiction off of.
Hey I always say nonfiction is the stuff they base fiction off of.
10/7 c12 10Helljumper206
Took a bit longer then I predicted but the doubt is forming between sisters. Keep it up.
Took a bit longer then I predicted but the doubt is forming between sisters. Keep it up.
10/6 c11 Steve
I always welcome a bit of worldbuilding.
I always welcome a bit of worldbuilding.
10/3 c10 Guest
Thought for sure you’d have Luz show Amity the picture of her long lost sister. I kinda pictured it going like this.
Luz: And speaking of Lucia, she sent me an interesting picture.
Amity: Of what?
Luz: Of her and a girl that looks almost exactly like, well… like you. You know, before you dyed your hair lilac. Here, look.
Luz shows Amity her phone to show her the picture.
Amity:(looking at Lucia) You know, I see the resemblance between you and your sister. And the girl next her, you’re right. She does look like me. And those ears…
Luz: I think she’s just a cosplay girl. I mean, what are the odds of a witch in the Human Realm? As far as I’m concerned, Eda was the only one who had a working portal.
Amity: I guess you’re right.
After Luz leaves for the bathroom
Amity: That girl next to Lucia… It couldn’t be. It’s not possible, is it.
Just throwing this out before I post, I hope Luz gets her portal working. She gets home, stops whatever plan Belos has, and reunites a family. That is like three wins.
Thought for sure you’d have Luz show Amity the picture of her long lost sister. I kinda pictured it going like this.
Luz: And speaking of Lucia, she sent me an interesting picture.
Amity: Of what?
Luz: Of her and a girl that looks almost exactly like, well… like you. You know, before you dyed your hair lilac. Here, look.
Luz shows Amity her phone to show her the picture.
Amity:(looking at Lucia) You know, I see the resemblance between you and your sister. And the girl next her, you’re right. She does look like me. And those ears…
Luz: I think she’s just a cosplay girl. I mean, what are the odds of a witch in the Human Realm? As far as I’m concerned, Eda was the only one who had a working portal.
Amity: I guess you’re right.
After Luz leaves for the bathroom
Amity: That girl next to Lucia… It couldn’t be. It’s not possible, is it.
Just throwing this out before I post, I hope Luz gets her portal working. She gets home, stops whatever plan Belos has, and reunites a family. That is like three wins.
10/3 c10 tylerchavis97
Yes, being the other third of Ed and Em explains everything about Amelia; or rather Emily.
Wonder how she’s going to take the news when she them? And how all the Blights will react when she referred to them as elves?
Yes, being the other third of Ed and Em explains everything about Amelia; or rather Emily.
Wonder how she’s going to take the news when she them? And how all the Blights will react when she referred to them as elves?
10/1 c9 Steve
As an optimist I try to see the good in people so I’m going to assume creepy Luz is being sweet…
Also Tyler I agree I very much would like to see how they whole gang interacts together once they are all on the same page.
As an optimist I try to see the good in people so I’m going to assume creepy Luz is being sweet…
Also Tyler I agree I very much would like to see how they whole gang interacts together once they are all on the same page.
10/1 c9 tylerchavis97
I’m really looking forward to Lucia and Amelia’s reaction when Luz tells them everything.
Wonder how Amelia will take that she’s from the Boiling Isles
I’m really looking forward to Lucia and Amelia’s reaction when Luz tells them everything.
Wonder how Amelia will take that she’s from the Boiling Isles