9/17 c2 Guest
This looks promising, but you might want to go back and do formatting on th first chapter. The lack of paragraphs will keep reader away. It is really hard to read with all the text in just one big block.
This looks promising, but you might want to go back and do formatting on th first chapter. The lack of paragraphs will keep reader away. It is really hard to read with all the text in just one big block.
9/16 c1 Lana
I like this a lot will continue reading it soon
I like this a lot will continue reading it soon