10/11 c216 4Stormysea-breaks
The dialogue is my biggest challenge. I will continue to try and get it more American. Like in life, some chapters are better than others! Thanks for the review.
The dialogue is my biggest challenge. I will continue to try and get it more American. Like in life, some chapters are better than others! Thanks for the review.
10/11 c216 Guest
why do they talk like that? They're not british.
why do they talk like that? They're not british.
9/28 c195 Guest
Beautiful
Beautiful