9/26 c2 98Fae'sFlower
Great second chapter! I feel bad for Elphaba and all the stares, whispers, and insults, but loved her moment of happiness when Morrible accepted her. I know she'll get through it. But Galinda measuring her hair with a measuring tape made me laugh.
Wonderful job! Can't wait to read more!
Great second chapter! I feel bad for Elphaba and all the stares, whispers, and insults, but loved her moment of happiness when Morrible accepted her. I know she'll get through it. But Galinda measuring her hair with a measuring tape made me laugh.
Wonderful job! Can't wait to read more!
9/26 c2 Guest
With all due respect, Fan Fiction is about taking known characters in a slightly different direction than they were presented, not almost exactly following the path in which they were introduced and interspersing verbiage directly from their origin into a story. You write very well; please consider drawing from your obvious talents to take a fresher approach.
With all due respect, Fan Fiction is about taking known characters in a slightly different direction than they were presented, not almost exactly following the path in which they were introduced and interspersing verbiage directly from their origin into a story. You write very well; please consider drawing from your obvious talents to take a fresher approach.
9/20 c1 James Birdsong
Amazing
Amazing
9/20 c1 Fae'sFlower
Nice first chapter! I liked seeing the train journey and how you tied in the musical. Frex made me frown (no surprise there). And you started writing this 4 years ago! Wow! I'm glad you picked it back up! Can't wait to see what's next! :-)
Nice first chapter! I liked seeing the train journey and how you tied in the musical. Frex made me frown (no surprise there). And you started writing this 4 years ago! Wow! I'm glad you picked it back up! Can't wait to see what's next! :-)
9/20 c1 Guest
FYI..."pair" is a set of two, "pear" is a fruit.
FYI..."pair" is a set of two, "pear" is a fruit.